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Ricky is beyond adorable. I love what you have accomplished in only 5 chapters. Sex, love, mob, heartbreak, and a happy ending. I loved this is was very well written and exciting! Great job love!

Glad that everything turned out good :) this was a great little short story!!! I loved it!!

This is probably one of the best short stories I've read in a long time. :)

I hope Mike is coming for him. Poor Rick!!! I've really enjoyed this!! I will be sad to see it end next chapter but don't beat yourself up too much about it. Maybe you could start another story with a similar story line if you wanted to go into the idea more...

I absolutely love this. Aw but Ricky got sucked into this mess anyways. Can't wait for the next chapter. So sad that the next chapter is the last.

So mike is a douche!!!! I think he is lying though. My spidey senses are tingling!!! Can't wait to see what happens next :)

Awww poor Ricky. ): Mike can't mean the things he said because they're so cute together and things were going great. And I kinda feel like something sort of bad might happen.

How does this story not have more attention??

I am hopeful for the future of these two, even though the things Mike said were despicable. My theory is maybe he's realizing how dangerous this job is, or he's being threatened by the same person who killed his father, and he got Rick at a safe distance the only way he knew how, in order to protect him.

Mike can't turn into that!! He better not drag Rick into crap!!! Oh my goodness!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next :) I wonder if he will go and see his dad?!?

Definitely wasn't expecting Mike's dad to be a mob boss. Hopefully Mike doesn't choose that route. I can only see bad things happening if he chooses that route. Great chapter though! And I love the layout!!

Love this!
Can't wait for more :)

Great first chapter :) I hope Mike isn't going to be a dick to Rick (lol unintentional rhyme) looking forward to more!!

Oh my goodness! Loving this and can't wait for more!!