The Fog - Comments

This is SO GOOD. Octavia is one of my favorite characters but she pisses me off here because prideful much? Noelle makes her look like such a child. Looking forward to your next update!

While I love Octavia loads, I think that she really is a character who wants to challenge everyone for no reason at all, especially someone who had ties with Lincoln. I loved seeing the two of them go at it, one for having their pride hurt and the other because she doesn't take shit. LOVE.

Perfect perfect perfect perfect

Perfect perfect perfect perfect

Perfect perfect perfect perfect

Perfect perfect perfect perfect

Octavia is treading on dangerous ground there my friend. Pushing around May- oh excuse me, Noelle (wink wink) around like that. I hope Noelle knocks her good at least once even though I totally love Octavia to death. And I NEED to know what Lincoln did. And fuck the sexual tension with Bell is nuts. Oh my god. Perfect as usual.

I'm really excited for the next chapter!!

I'm really excited for the next chapter!!

Okay but like when she tackled him and put her mouth right by his I was thinking that she was totally going to kiss him and I was like WHAT KIND OF DISTRACTION IS THIS and I got really excited but I realized that she made them freakout because she had attacked Bellamy and not them haha. That was perfect. And I really want to know what they all want with her and now Bellamy is taking her I need to know why he wants her and oh my god I LOVE THIS B

like really really really really sexy

like really really really really sexy

like really really really really sexy

like really really really really sexy

also bellamy is fucking sexy

also bellamy is fucking sexy

Lets start with the prologue here
Oh my god. I can't even. I love how he instantly was thinking like how Clarke was going to be mad at him because she completely would be mad at him. It's such a Clarke thing to do and I just loved that he thought of her kind of thing. I also love how I totally rocked his fucking world. Like bye bitch.

Chapter one
Him begging for death makes me so proud of him. Like he just isn't afraid to die and he thinks that dying is end game. He's alway s o ready to die. I also love how I'm like lol at you, don't underestimate me fucking bastard. I will destroy you, watch me. So tough and bad ass. God.

Chapter two
Poor baby is counting down the days and is probably so worried about O this makes me feel so sad. Seriously though that fight scene was hot even though it probably was supposed to be super brutal, it was mostly hot. I also want to know who just totally fucked her up and is about to take her down. Kill them all.