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  • crystalxship

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    I stumbled across this story because of my new found love for Seguin after seeing him in the body issue. I actually teared up reading the most recent chapter. It just seemed so real.
    July 7th, 2015 at 03:35am
  • pawnsinplay

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    And you were worried about the ending being too abrupt. It's so perfect, bittersweet, and it made me cry. So kudos to you lol...though that's not really hard to do. I LOVED IT SO MUCH!
    May 27th, 2015 at 05:54am
  • Thatmom

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    Sad and depressing.......YES:(. Beautifully written..........ABSOLUTELY!!!!
    May 26th, 2015 at 10:02pm
  • pogo5176

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    you honestly had me bawling my eyes out through the entire thing. loved it though
    May 26th, 2015 at 10:02pm
  • qwertyu123

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    Definitely cried the whole time. Loved it!
    May 26th, 2015 at 09:34pm
  • hockeychick37

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    This was soooo sad but soooo good! Can't wait for the next update!!!
    May 26th, 2015 at 07:03pm
  • hockeychick37

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    This was soooo sad but soooo good! Can't wait for the next update!!!
    May 26th, 2015 at 07:02pm
  • gipsy danger.

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    Oh my goodness this was absolutely adorable and I loved it! I just, OH SEGGY WITH BABIES. BABY GIRL! I don't know if I can actually handle that haha.
    I just loved it!
    January 9th, 2015 at 05:41am
  • pawnsinplay

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    This was so gosh darn cute. Like it melted my heart, almost totally, and now I'm just all happy and mushy and how the crap is anyone supposed to get anything done with these feelings?!

    It's official. I'm done.

    Bangin
    January 7th, 2015 at 09:21pm
  • Thatmom

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    Absolutely beautiful!!!!
    January 7th, 2015 at 03:08pm
  • Thatmom

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    Loved it!!! You really could add a few more chapters:)
    December 22nd, 2014 at 04:15pm
  • gipsy danger.

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    Thank you so so much for telling me that you posted this!
    This was absolutely adorable!
    I can never handle hockey players and children, they are the best! And with it being one of my favorite teams, I am done. It was adorable!
    I loved this!
    December 21st, 2014 at 10:33pm
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    So adorable
    December 21st, 2014 at 07:48pm
  • Call The Angels

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    Awwwww! That was adorable! Between my friend Raychel and you and Lundsey writing these oneshots I'm very quickly developing a massive soft spot for Dallas.

    Plus, hockey players with babies? Nothing cuter!
    December 21st, 2014 at 04:06pm
  • pawnsinplay

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    So clearly you wrote a better oneshot for yourself than the one I wrote for you...

    I QUIT mrgun

    For serious though, this was adorable! Just imagining these hockey dudes with kids makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I love it so much that I can't even be jealous. Oh wait. Yes I can and it hurts but I can't do anything about it except maybe read it one more time and smack myself because your writing.

    I QUIT.
    December 21st, 2014 at 10:32am