Everything Will Change - Comments

maudaah (215)

:: Class of 2015
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@ RooWillBiteYoFace
Thank you :) glad you like it xx

January 21st, 2015 at 11:45pm

RooWillBiteYoFace (100)

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I love this ❤❤❤

January 21st, 2015 at 11:37pm

maudaah (215)

:: Class of 2015
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@ Tipsy Returns
Awww thanks for this lovely comment! I'm glad you like it ^^ ♡

January 14th, 2015 at 05:00pm

Tipsy. (100)

:: NaNoWriMo 2015
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Alright, hands down! Here I am! Haha

Very honestly, I loved this. I'm halfway through chapter four, and I loveee the concept. The two characters (Ash and Luke) and portrayed so well, not to mention, I didn't like Luke one bit haha I think he has some deep and nice thoughts, but the conclusions he draws...my God. I guess I have a love-hate feeling for him. I totally adored Ash though. He's such a mum's boy. Reminded me of a cousin of mine hehe.

This is written so...properly. I don't know the right word, but its so simple and easy to read, follow and relate. I loved it, and will read furrther! Hoping to see some immense character development later on, not to mention I want Ash to be more of an...extrovert... but not Luk-ish ahhaha. Going well, will let you know as I read further. (:

January 14th, 2015 at 07:21am