Mars Hotel - Comments

So sorry that it took me forever to finish this! You know I always love your work I adored Ozzy and Myles together, and I think their relationship developed so beautifully. I smiled the entire time I was reading the last chapter. <3

Oh man, where are you Myles?!?!

@ Deadlihood
Oh thank God

@ Paradise_City_Child
No it isn't! I just haven't had time to sit down and write the next chapter yet!

Is that the end of the fic?

These two come with a LOT of baggage. They could be a train wreck waiting to happen...but I still want to see them together!!!!!!! Glad you finally posted the big reveal. I was going nuts!

She has the best brother! And he's totally right about Myles and the fact that she needs to take a chance on him. She deserves to be happy. I understand her hesitation, but I'd like her to get her head out of her ass soon. Lol. I'm curious about the phone call Myles received. All these tantalizing hints you're dropping about something he's hiding...you're killing me, tease!

Your writing style is so entertaining! I have to say that this is an awesome story, excited for the update!

Sounds like one hell of a birthday! And of course she runs straight into Myles when she's wasted and hungry...why wouldn't she? Well, now that she's thinking about how fond she's growing of him, I fully expect her to panic and backtrack. I hope she doesn't, though. I'm still convinced that hooking up with him would be good for her mental state.

I wanna spend a day at the beach with Myles Kennedy...and his band mates So, I understand why she wouldn't push him to tell what he's running from, but still, she shared her story. It's only fair for him to reciprocate. And OH. MY. GOD. I love plantains. Mmmmmm. Now I really want some.

Chris had better not start trying to be all nice now. If he does, I swear I will jump into this story and kick his ass!

Chris sucks. Just...UGH! I'm gonna need Ozzy to take her mom's--and Carrie's--advice. She's gotta work off that frustration and anger somehow.

@ Deadlihood
Oh, I see. Cool username by the way lol.
So, do I just put it in the story like an image?

@ Shattered_Mirror
They're page dividers! They're JPGs.

How do you make those intricate page dividers?

How do you make those intricate page dividers?

Yeah...it was ALL Carrie's fault she started thinking naughty thoughts about Myles. *snort* As if!

Her relationship with her brother reminds me so much of my and Rick's relationship. <3

Already I love Ozzy. And Myles. Not even gonna lie, when you described Chris as GQ-ing it up, I laughed out loud. Naturally I think Myles and Ozzy are good for each other, but with you being the author, I sense turmoil, drama, slightly toxic relationship, horribly toxic relationships, etc. I'm just here for the ride.

You have a new story and i never noticed :o
Chapter 1 and i'm already in love!
Can't wait to read more soon!