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  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    So sorry that it took me forever to finish this! You know I always love your work In Love I adored Ozzy and Myles together, and I think their relationship developed so beautifully. I smiled the entire time I was reading the last chapter. <3
    July 16th, 2015 at 09:06pm
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    Oh man, where are you Myles?!?!
    June 19th, 2015 at 06:19pm
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    @ Deadlihood
    Oh thank God
    June 4th, 2015 at 09:31am
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    @ Paradise_City_Child
    No it isn't! I just haven't had time to sit down and write the next chapter yet!
    June 4th, 2015 at 03:18am
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    Is that the end of the fic?
    June 3rd, 2015 at 08:35pm
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    These two come with a LOT of baggage. They could be a train wreck waiting to happen...but I still want to see them together!!!!!!! Glad you finally posted the big reveal. I was going nuts!
    April 29th, 2015 at 11:12pm
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    She has the best brother! And he's totally right about Myles and the fact that she needs to take a chance on him. She deserves to be happy. I understand her hesitation, but I'd like her to get her head out of her ass soon. Lol. I'm curious about the phone call Myles received. All these tantalizing hints you're dropping about something he's hiding...you're killing me, tease!
    April 22nd, 2015 at 07:25am
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    Your writing style is so entertaining! I have to say that this is an awesome story, excited for the update!
    April 19th, 2015 at 10:39am
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    Sounds like one hell of a birthday! And of course she runs straight into Myles when she's wasted and hungry...why wouldn't she? Well, now that she's thinking about how fond she's growing of him, I fully expect her to panic and backtrack. I hope she doesn't, though. I'm still convinced that hooking up with him would be good for her mental state.
    April 4th, 2015 at 05:46am
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    I wanna spend a day at the beach with Myles Kennedy...and his band mates Wink So, I understand why she wouldn't push him to tell what he's running from, but still, she shared her story. It's only fair for him to reciprocate. And OH. MY. GOD. I love plantains. Mmmmmm. Now I really want some.
    March 24th, 2015 at 09:43pm
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    Chris had better not start trying to be all nice now. If he does, I swear I will jump into this story and kick his ass!
    March 2nd, 2015 at 05:53pm
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    Chris sucks. Just...UGH! I'm gonna need Ozzy to take her mom's--and Carrie's--advice. She's gotta work off that frustration and anger somehow. tehe
    February 16th, 2015 at 02:40am
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    @ Deadlihood
    Oh, I see. Cool username by the way lol.
    So, do I just put it in the story like an image?
    February 6th, 2015 at 08:17am
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    @ Shattered_Mirror
    They're page dividers! They're JPGs.
    February 6th, 2015 at 07:48am
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    How do you make those intricate page dividers?
    February 6th, 2015 at 07:20am
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    How do you make those intricate page dividers?
    February 6th, 2015 at 07:20am
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    lmfao Yeah...it was ALL Carrie's fault she started thinking naughty thoughts about Myles. *snort* As if! Wink
    January 29th, 2015 at 12:34am
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    Her relationship with her brother reminds me so much of my and Rick's relationship. <3
    January 22nd, 2015 at 10:50pm
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    Already I love Ozzy. And Myles. Not even gonna lie, when you described Chris as GQ-ing it up, I laughed out loud. Naturally I think Myles and Ozzy are good for each other, but with you being the author, I sense turmoil, drama, slightly toxic relationship, horribly toxic relationships, etc. I'm just here for the ride.
    January 15th, 2015 at 10:32pm
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    You have a new story and i never noticed :o
    Chapter 1 and i'm already in love!
    Can't wait to read more soon!
    January 7th, 2015 at 01:15am
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