Hanging Tree. - Comments

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Patiently waiting for an update on this. :) Love it.

@ st. james.
This story isn't finished yet. Lol Thank you is the one that's finished but that has 40 chapters short and long the longest chapter is 1,000 words. The sequel to that is called distant memories. :) but thank you so much I'm so happy you like it.

Zero clue who Bucky Barnes is, but holy canoli, I really, really like this. I've only read the first two chapters but I loved how you ended the first and the beginning of the second made me so sad. I plan on reading the rest of this, but wow, you've got me hooked.

Thank you for the comment! Here's yours in return, sorry if it's not too long I suck at lengthy comments.

I've read to chapter 4 so far and I've read enough to assume this is an Avenger's fan-fic? Or just Captain America? Either way I enjoyed it and I will continue reading once I've finished this comment. I did notice a couple errors but nothing serious.

"Your ruthless." This is from chapter 3 and I believe (could be wrong) it's meant to be you're

How ever if she really wanted to she could them all, in a few seconds. This was the only thing I noticed in chapter 4. I believe the word kill is meant to be after could?

That was the only real errors I saw and I figured you would at least want to know about them. I didn't think I'd actually like this but I'm really into it so I'll be reading further as you update!

Thank you for the comment! Here's yours in return, sorry if it's not too long I suck at lengthy comments.

I've read to chapter 4 so far and I've read enough to assume this is an Avenger's fan-fic? Or just Captain America? Either way I enjoyed it and I will continue reading once I've finished this comment. I did notice a couple errors but nothing serious.

"Your ruthless." This is from chapter 3 and I believe (could be wrong) it's meant to be you're

How ever if she really wanted to she could them all, in a few seconds. This was the only thing I noticed in chapter 4. I believe the word kill is meant to be after could?

That was the only real errors I saw and I figured you would at least want to know about them. I didn't think I'd actually like this but I'm really into it so I'll be reading further as you update!

@ champion;
Thanks, I'm writing from my phone so words tend to get messed up and such.

Hey, I came to check this out and noticed you said "if" instead of "of" in the summary. Thought you might want someone to point that out.

Okay third chapter, first paragraph, start of second sentence, 'her get rested'? Did you mean hand?

He was looking at it with a curious mind

Maybe he looked curiously could work too?

she sat straight

Bby I feel terrible as I critique you now, but maybe putting in straight up might be good to use here. I'm so word anal, sorry!!

"Bucky wouldn't want this, you're different."

"You're ruthless."

Fourth Chapter

Maybe you could describe the red head a little more, as well as the random guy?

How ever if she really wanted to she could them all, in a few seconds.

I'm assuming kill or seduce was supposed to be here?

Sometimes it may be better to write out numbers unless it's over 100 and/or telling time.

Ah, okay! I totally get it now, okay cool cool. I'm feeling it, the only thing I can say is to not be afraid to get into the mindset of your mc, Ivy. Like feel all the emotions, if you have to act out some or what have you, do it!

For instance, when he says "who the hell is Bucky?"

You best believe my badass self would gasp and really question his amnesia, I'd feel so sad and stuff.

But no really do continue and can't wait to see where you go with this. c:

Okay, so I don't see anything too wrong, sometimes though I feel like the MC is kind of Mary-Sue-ish, but not too bad.

But let me say this is the first fic I've seen with a vampire, I dig that bby! It's new, and though it may seem kinda odd, it's hella working for me. If anything I'd look up idioms, and analogies. Some of the word play felt a little awkward to me.

But I'm only on the second chapter. Like how did she and Bucky meet? Like yo I'm digging it. So let me continue c:

I'll admit I've never read a Winter Soldier fan fiction before and know nothing about the fandom (yet) but I like what I've read so far :) Who is Bucky? Is Bucky really dead or is Bucky somehow alive? Steve seems to want to still protect this girl no matter what even if she could easily kill him. I was wondering if she was a vampire but the first chapI'll admit I've never read a Winter Soldier fan fiction before and know nothing about the fandom (yet) but I like what I've read so far :) Who is Bucky? Is Bucky really dead or is Bucky somehow alive? Steve seems to want to still protect this girl no matter what even if she could easily kill him. I was wondering if she was a vampire but the first chapter introducing her as a character was great :) As for a possible name suggestion, what about Ivy? Whatever name you decide on I'm sure will be amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next :)ter introducing her as a character was great :) As for a possible name suggestion, what about Ivy? Whatever name you decide on I'm sure will be amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

I'll admit I've never read a Winter Soldier fan fiction before and know nothing about the fandom (yet) but I like what I've read so far :) Who is Bucky? Is Bucky really dead or is Bucky somehow alive? Steve seems to want to still protect this girl no matter what even if she could easily kill him. I was wondering if she was a vampire but the first chapI'll admit I've never read a Winter Soldier fan fiction before and know nothing about the fandom (yet) but I like what I've read so far :) Who is Bucky? Is Bucky really dead or is Bucky somehow alive? Steve seems to want to still protect this girl no matter what even if she could easily kill him. I was wondering if she was a vampire but the first chapter introducing her as a character was great :) As for a possible name suggestion, what about Ivy? Whatever name you decide on I'm sure will be amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next :)ter introducing her as a character was great :) As for a possible name suggestion, what about Ivy? Whatever name you decide on I'm sure will be amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

so excited for this! i'm so glad all these bucky fanfics are coming out and this one got me so interested and it's only the first chapter! update soon !!

so excited for this! i'm so glad all these bucky fanfics are coming out and this one got me so interested and it's only the first chapter! update soon !!