Close as Strangers - Comments

  • dolanduncan

    dolanduncan (100)

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    Hey! I really liked this. I think you're a very good writer.

    That being said I would like to offer you a small piece of advice, when writing numbers you should actually spell them out as opposed to just putting the number. (Ex. Instead of '6 months' you should write 'six months.'

    Okay, that's all I'd like to say. Happy writing! :-)
    March 23rd, 2015 at 04:10am