I love love love love love that this story is set in Toronto. Any story set in Canada is automatically winning. I like the layout, it's a bit simple, but I can read it which is never a bad thing :) The summary page is really well written, it really sets the stage for this realistic story. I can tell that this is exactly what being a twenty something is like in the 2010+ era.
Content
You have a great grasp on writing in first person! It's so funny that I can feel the emotion running off the narrator and yet she is totally detached to what is going on her.
I really appreciate the character descriptions too, they seem plausible from their appearance to personality. They're far from perfect and totally okay with it.
Summative
Overall I feel like this story is going to be an excellent portrayal of what being a young adult really is like in this time period. It's harder than it looks and I really appreciate that someone is willing to dive into it!
I love love love love love that this story is set in Toronto. Any story set in Canada is automatically winning. I like the layout, it's a bit simple, but I can read it which is never a bad thing :) The summary page is really well written, it really sets the stage for this realistic story. I can tell that this is exactly what being a twenty something is like in the 2010+ era.
Content
You have a great grasp on writing in first person! It's so funny that I can feel the emotion running off the narrator and yet she is totally detached to what is going on her.
I really appreciate the character descriptions too, they seem plausible from their appearance to personality. They're far from perfect and totally okay with it.
Summative
Overall I feel like this story is going to be an excellent portrayal of what being a young adult really is like in this time period. It's harder than it looks and I really appreciate that someone is willing to dive into it!