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  • branchley

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    aw, that was amazingly written
    the kite was epiccc
    September 30th, 2008 at 01:16am
  • oatmeal774

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    Wow. That was a great story! I like how you worked the kite back into the ending. It made it all come full circle and made me happy.
    September 28th, 2008 at 08:21pm
  • monday.

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    I'm so sad that it's over. D:
    That ending was amazing, though! Love it, for sure.
    September 28th, 2008 at 02:44am
  • inyourbackyard

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    sigh I know this is a happy ending (and a great one at that!) but it still made me feel melencholy. You did an excellent job of capturing Felix's emotions by the grave and I'm so glad Brendon came back.
    Can't wait for your new story!!!
    September 27th, 2008 at 09:52pm
  • monday.

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    I absolutely adore this story. I can't stop reading.
    I'm supposed to be writing a paper right now, and everytime I go to the next chapter I'm like, "ok, this is the LAST ONE for now," but then I get to the end and I'm like, "ok, just one more."

    You're contributing to my procrastination in the best way possible. (:
    September 27th, 2008 at 08:17pm
  • AutumnBlooms

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    i'm so sad this story is over! but the way you wrote the ending to the story makes me less sad, it was really beautifully written!
    September 27th, 2008 at 03:45pm
  • oatmeal774

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    Oh dear, the end is near? Well, at least you said you'll be posting more stories so I can read them, too... This was a nice chapter, the name Felix really does just fit better. :)
    September 26th, 2008 at 06:09am
  • XxdeadharlequinxX

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    When Brendon thought that he recognized Louis, I totally knew that it was Felix's brother.
    I liked it, I'm glad that your comments are back to normal so that you won't be switvhing accounts, and I can't wait for your next story.
    September 26th, 2008 at 05:04am
  • love1d

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    Aw Louis! What a nice and caring brother.
    Can't wait to read more!

    I love A days. My B days suck. =/
    September 26th, 2008 at 03:06am
  • love1d

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    Aw Louis! What a nice and caring brother.
    Can't wait to read more!

    I love A days. My B days suck. =/
    September 26th, 2008 at 03:02am
  • AutumnBlooms

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    one more chapter? :[
    but i love this story!
    September 26th, 2008 at 02:42am
  • branchley

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    omigosh (can't wait for the new william story)
    and really really looking forward to more of this story. its just too good =D
    September 26th, 2008 at 01:57am
  • branchley

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    omgsh this is so intense... i love itttt!!!!
    keepitup i can't wait to see what happens. <3
    September 26th, 2008 at 01:40am
  • oatmeal774

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    (no, I'm pretty sure you're right- it's meet the robinsons) Oooo and the plot thickens! Great chapter! Glad you have power back.
    September 25th, 2008 at 03:29pm
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    dude isnt it the song from that disney movie...
    i do know what its called...
    meet the robertsons? or something like that...
    robinsons?
    yeah, thats it. meet the robinsons?
    or am i just completely insane and incorrect?
    i dont know.
    but hey, i tried.

    xx
    September 25th, 2008 at 09:41am
  • love1d

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    I had a feeling it was going to be her brother. Great updates!
    Can't wait to read more!

    Brendon go back to Felix! It's the rigth thing to do!
    September 25th, 2008 at 03:24am
  • Oh Desdemona!

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    Garglebarghalaljgbakl!!
    GO BACK BRENDON!
    Roar!
    September 25th, 2008 at 02:29am
  • AutumnBlooms

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    AH! why did you leave us at a cliffhanger? haha well i hope you update soon! i love this story.
    September 25th, 2008 at 02:22am
  • cameoskies

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    the song would definitely be featured in "meet the robinsons"
    lol
    i win all around :D

    i had this little inkling that it would be her brother... haha he's pissed off now.
    September 25th, 2008 at 02:08am
  • popsicle900

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    omigosh. this story is really amazing. i'm soooo excited for the last three chapters, it's a bit ridiculous! Are you going to keep writing/ start a new story after it's done?
    September 25th, 2008 at 02:01am