January 27th, 2015 at 06:17am
From Eden. - Comments
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All I have to say is that you can't leave it there. I need another update!!!January 27th, 2015 at 05:54am
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wow this chapter was amazing!!January 27th, 2015 at 05:37am
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Oh gosh, Delilah's dad seems pretty scary! I have a feeling that he's going to be causing them a lot of trouble in the near future.
Hey twelve chapters isn't bad to wait for a little action! I read a trilogy once where I literally had to wait the whole dang time
Of course Brian would make it perverted Delilah, he always does that. Haha.
He sounds like her dad, telling her to have a good day at school
Oh gosh, if Gena finds out about Delilah and Zacky, there's gonna be trouble, I'm sure! And how can you not mean to cheat on someone, that's silly.
Yay, more action ;D I'm ready for that ahaha.January 27th, 2015 at 12:08am -
I smell trouble on the horizon and I'm excited!January 26th, 2015 at 10:20pm
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Well, that's a very eventful morning at Brian's house I believe. Haha.
But once again, anther amazing chapter. I feel sort of bad for both Del and Gena :/January 26th, 2015 at 10:12pm -
Oh wow what a story! I love it!
So well written and lots of drama, it's great! xJanuary 26th, 2015 at 09:43pm -
Oh wow what a story! I love it!
So well written and lots of drama, it's great! xJanuary 26th, 2015 at 09:42pm -
Fuck Gena. She needs to go away. Lol. I liked this chapter, and I thought it was sweet that he wanted a kiss before she left. Can't wait for more!January 26th, 2015 at 08:45pm
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oh my that was a close one. I do agree Gena shouldn't of cheated on zacky Del should just let things take it course she'll be fine :) can't wait for more!January 26th, 2015 at 08:22pm
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She shouldn't have cheated if she really loved him that much. I can't wait to see what else happens January 26th, 2015 at 07:31pm
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Omg theyes finally kissed. Yay! I'm really starting to see Johnny as a bad ass lol can't wait for moreJanuary 26th, 2015 at 12:35pm
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wow.... each chapter pulls me in more!!! love it!!!January 26th, 2015 at 07:28am
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wow.... each chapter pulls me in more!!! love it!!!January 26th, 2015 at 07:28am
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AHHH THEY KISSED
Yay! sorry lol I was happy about that 
Her dad seems pretty messed up. Can't wait to see what happens next.January 26th, 2015 at 06:31am -
It's about damn time! I literally threw my fist in the air. I'm excited to see whats about to happen. Her dad's pretty sick though, in a weird way it excites me. Can't wait for more!January 26th, 2015 at 04:42am
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BUT YOU CAN, ZACKY, YOU CAN AND SHOULD. Lol sorry that's what I was thinking during that last scene. Great update!January 26th, 2015 at 04:25am
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This. Is. Amazing.
Seriously, I'm in love with this story. I'm not usually a fan of fantasy with, but you write it with the perfect balance of romance and drama as well. Can't wait to read more lovely!
January 26th, 2015 at 03:56am -
Gosh, this is all just blowing my mind! It's getting so intense. But at least Delilah knows what she is. Too bad it wasn't what she was hoping. It's good that Delilah has somewhere safe to stay, but I'm wandering exactly how Zacky feels about her living with Brian? Way to go Brian, making Delilah uncomfortable xD it's so sweet that Zacky feels like he always has to be around her. And his blushing is so cute! And the tampon bit, loved it
I can't wait for the next chapter! (or three, since I can't ever seem to catch just one at a time) January 26th, 2015 at 02:36am -
loved the update, and can't wait to read more! really hoping to see more chemistry between zacky and delilah soon!January 25th, 2015 at 05:56pm
holy shit !!