From Eden. - Comments

Oh my god im gonna scream ahhh cant wait for the next update
holy shit !!

All I have to say is that you can't leave it there. I need another update!!!

wow this chapter was amazing!!

Oh gosh, Delilah's dad seems pretty scary! I have a feeling that he's going to be causing them a lot of trouble in the near future.
Hey twelve chapters isn't bad to wait for a little action! I read a trilogy once where I literally had to wait the whole dang time
Of course Brian would make it perverted Delilah, he always does that. Haha.
He sounds like her dad, telling her to have a good day at school
Oh gosh, if Gena finds out about Delilah and Zacky, there's gonna be trouble, I'm sure! And how can you not mean to cheat on someone, that's silly.
Yay, more action ;D I'm ready for that ahaha.

I smell trouble on the horizon and I'm excited!

Well, that's a very eventful morning at Brian's house I believe. Haha.
But once again, anther amazing chapter. I feel sort of bad for both Del and Gena :/

Oh wow what a story! I love it!
So well written and lots of drama, it's great! x

Oh wow what a story! I love it!
So well written and lots of drama, it's great! x

Fuck Gena. She needs to go away. Lol. I liked this chapter, and I thought it was sweet that he wanted a kiss before she left. Can't wait for more!

oh my that was a close one. I do agree Gena shouldn't of cheated on zacky Del should just let things take it course she'll be fine :) can't wait for more!

She shouldn't have cheated if she really loved him that much. I can't wait to see what else happens

Omg theyes finally kissed. Yay! I'm really starting to see Johnny as a bad ass lol can't wait for more

wow.... each chapter pulls me in more!!! love it!!!

wow.... each chapter pulls me in more!!! love it!!!

AHHH THEY KISSED Yay! sorry lol I was happy about that
Her dad seems pretty messed up. Can't wait to see what happens next.

It's about damn time! I literally threw my fist in the air. I'm excited to see whats about to happen. Her dad's pretty sick though, in a weird way it excites me. Can't wait for more!

BUT YOU CAN, ZACKY, YOU CAN AND SHOULD. Lol sorry that's what I was thinking during that last scene. Great update!

This. Is. Amazing.
Seriously, I'm in love with this story. I'm not usually a fan of fantasy with, but you write it with the perfect balance of romance and drama as well. Can't wait to read more lovely!

Gosh, this is all just blowing my mind! It's getting so intense. But at least Delilah knows what she is. Too bad it wasn't what she was hoping. It's good that Delilah has somewhere safe to stay, but I'm wandering exactly how Zacky feels about her living with Brian? Way to go Brian, making Delilah uncomfortable xD it's so sweet that Zacky feels like he always has to be around her. And his blushing is so cute! And the tampon bit, loved it

I can't wait for the next chapter! (or three, since I can't ever seem to catch just one at a time )

loved the update, and can't wait to read more! really hoping to see more chemistry between zacky and delilah soon!