The Leather Jacket - Comments

@ Shake_Tramp
Hi, ah no problem I have no many issues with dodgy internet!

Aw thank you so much! I'm actually just about to start another, literally after I write this! So I hope you enjoy that as much :) xx

@ IveGotRedHair
Hey, no worries about the late reply! Sorry my comment posted three different times. Grr. It wouldn't go through and then BAM. haha

I really did love your story. It was SUCH a great idea and I really enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to see what else you come up with in the future!! :)

@ Shake_Tramp
Hi, sorry for such a late reply!
Thank you very much :) I agree with your comment on my editing, it needs some work and I'm currently slowly working through all my stories to try and improve them. I'm also just about to start another so I hope you continue to enjoy my stories :)

@ alltimeh1gh
Hi, sorry for such the late reply!
Thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot. I agree with you, my editing does need some work and I'm slowly working through all my stories trying to get them up to standard. No way, I thought your tumblr looked familiar I already follow you, I'm ISeeAGirlWithBrightRedHair.
Really? That's awesome! Two of the best nights of my life :)

I loved this! It was adorable, and I fell in love with both Jack and Alex all over again. I definitely think there's massive possibility for a sequel!! As long as you don't do the typical 'past coming back to them' thing and keep it as unusual as this story, it'd be awesome! I definitely agree with Shake_Tramp, though - a couple of little words bothered me every now and then. If you're ever interested in any more advice, you can always hmu on my Tumblr?! It's alexgasxarth. I would offer to help on here but I hardy ever use my Mibba, haha. Oh and finally - I went to ATL/YMAS on the 10th and Wembley too! :)

This was super cute and you have some great ideas here. :) I'm glad I read it!

Can I offer a bit of constructive criticism from one writer to another, though? It would be great for you, as an author to make sure you really go over your stories and edit them a couple times before they're posted if at all possible. :) You've got quite a few missing words in here, but even more words that were completely wrong. It's almost as though you wrote this on your phone and auto-correct tried to guess the word and got it close, but not quite right. For example, "exempt" rather than the word "except" that you should have used. Or "spouse" (meaning husband or wife, married partners) rather than the slang "s'pose". And so on. Little things like that make a huge difference to the quality of the story, and I'd love to see yours be the best they can be, since you really do have some clever ideas here!

This was super cute and you have some great ideas here. :) I'm glad I read it!

Can I offer a bit of constructive criticism from one writer to another, though? It would be great for you, as an author to make sure you really go over your stories and edit them a couple times before they're posted if at all possible. :) You've got quite a few missing words in here, but even more words that were completely wrong. It's almost as though you wrote this on your phone and auto-correct tried to guess the word and got it close, but not quite right. For example, "exempt" rather than the word "except" that you should have used. Or "spouse" (meaning husband or wife, married partners) rather than the slang "s'pose". And so on. Little things like that make a huge difference to the quality of the story, and I'd love to see yours be the best they can be, since you really do have some clever ideas here!

This was super cute and you have some great ideas here. :) I'm glad I read it!

Can I offer a bit of constructive criticism from one writer to another, though? It would be great for you, as an author to make sure you really go over your stories and edit them a couple times before they're posted if at all possible. :) You've got quite a few missing words in here, but even more words that were completely wrong. It's almost as though you wrote this on your phone and auto-correct tried to guess the word and got it close, but not quite right. For example, "exempt" rather than the word "except" that you should have used. Or "spouse" (meaning husband or wife, married partners) rather than the slang "s'pose". And so on. Little things like that make a huge difference to the quality of the story, and I'd love to see yours be the best they can be, since you really do have some clever ideas here!

@ Killjoyidiot
You're right I hadn't thought of that :)

Well if you wanna work on other stuff you can just have the sequel condensed into an epilogue if you want.

@ IveGotRedHair
I am indeed, and you make Lincoln sound like some far away magical land when I come from Derby ;) and i was just asking because I know no one going... ^-^

@ ShadowMooses
I feel bad for him and I wrote it! Aha that's awesome, are you standing? I'm not :( I live in a far away place called Lincolnshire and I wouldn't been able to get there. My bests friends going though!

Shit I feel bad for Jack so bad right now, but I'm pleased Alex is there for him because I guess he knows what it's like to feel alone... We seem to be going to the same ATL shows ;) are you going to the Birmingham signing next week?

Aww this was so adorable. I love this so much!!!

Aww this was so adorable. I love this so much!!!

WHAT

Dude, you just can't leave me there! Please update.

wHAT?

I didn't see that coming, but I like the idea non the other, and I was at the same show! It was amazing wasn't it?

Did it just leave me there? WHY?