I love how this starts; when you mention about her promise to herself. It's the best kind of promise, the hardest to keep sometimes and the most important. And breaking a promise you make to yourself probably hurts more than having someone else breaks their promise to you. Because you're the reason of your own heartbreak. You're the reason for your own disappointment and that kind of feeling is really deep and I love such raw emotions in story.
And Cole also made a promise to himself. Ah! This is such an interesting read. I'm just drawn to the emotions you're trying to convey here and I just love everything.
I like how you leave the ending open with the both of them breaking their promises to themselves. How Kacey tries to get Cole to love her. And how Cole still can't love Kacey. It leaves everything open for the readers to interpret and I think that's the best kind of ending there is.
I also adore your description. Your writing style is impeccable and beautiful.
Well done for writing such an amazing piece. Keep writing!
And Cole also made a promise to himself. Ah! This is such an interesting read. I'm just drawn to the emotions you're trying to convey here and I just love everything.
I like how you leave the ending open with the both of them breaking their promises to themselves. How Kacey tries to get Cole to love her. And how Cole still can't love Kacey. It leaves everything open for the readers to interpret and I think that's the best kind of ending there is.
I also adore your description. Your writing style is impeccable and beautiful.
Well done for writing such an amazing piece. Keep writing!