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saeglopur (350)

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I think this had an interesting premise but I'm not sure how realistic Eleanor/Simone's response is to it all. She doesn't really express any PTSD symptoms, which she would for having gone through something like estate. Also her ability to just give up her identity and go by Eleanor/Ella is unusual and very quick. A person wouldn't so easily and quickly change their name. I think with some proper editing, perhaps a beta, this could be vey good.

June 21st, 2015 at 08:26pm

tchalla (100)

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Wow.. Things have gotten pretty intense.

February 1st, 2015 at 11:14pm

Love_Bug!!! (100)

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One of the best stories on this site!!

January 25th, 2015 at 12:22am

Nick24 (100)

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This story is very, very, interesting and so original! I love the concept and the idea of a girl who has been lied to her entire life. The characters are beautifully portrayed and I love the suspense. Please update!

January 25th, 2015 at 12:10am

Blake_Degray (100)

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@ catisimaginary
Oh my gosh, I made a mistake! Thank you so much, haha. And I'm glad you like the story! And thanks for pointing that out!

January 20th, 2015 at 11:28pm

catisimaginary (100)

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Ok so i really like this story but I feel like youre getting names confused? Eli is her brother, but chapter 3 was in his POV and he was taking her shopping? Alex is his best friends name, right..? maybe Im the confused one lol

January 20th, 2015 at 05:12am