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  • Laylylu

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    This reminds me a lot of the house of night series... I don’t know if you did that on purpose, or what..
    January 30th, 2018 at 11:48am
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    @ Eon Duo Trainer Hina
    Thanks for commenting I will try to do that
    January 27th, 2015 at 06:01pm
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    Can I make a suggestion when for your writing? When you're writing out paragraphs, especially with dialogue in it, it's best to either make it all one paragraph or space it out a little more because it makes it a bit confusing to read.
    January 27th, 2015 at 04:37pm
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    @ Rick Grimes;
    Thanks so much sweetie <3
    January 27th, 2015 at 03:54pm
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    Loved the ending. Can't wait to see the next journey.
    January 27th, 2015 at 03:26pm
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    @ StrawberryMuse;
    You're welcome.
    January 27th, 2015 at 02:08am
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    @ Rick Grimes;
    Thanks so much hun<3
    January 27th, 2015 at 01:50am
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    @ Rick Grimes;
    Thanks so much hun<3
    January 27th, 2015 at 01:17am
  • simply amanda;

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    Loved it.
    January 27th, 2015 at 01:12am
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    @ Rick Grimes;
    Thanks so much hun <3
    January 26th, 2015 at 11:04pm
  • simply amanda;

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    Great update I can't wait for more.
    January 26th, 2015 at 10:59pm
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    @ Rick Grimes;
    Thanks
    January 26th, 2015 at 09:10pm
  • simply amanda;

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    Poor Harlyn. This was a good update. I can't wait to see what happens next.
    January 26th, 2015 at 07:16pm
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    @ Rick Grimes;
    Thanks honey <3
    January 26th, 2015 at 06:14pm
  • simply amanda;

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    I have missed a lot of updates! I loved all the updates hun. I can't wait to see more!
    January 26th, 2015 at 05:41pm
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    I have missed a lot of updates! I loved all the updates hun. I can't wait to see more!
    January 26th, 2015 at 05:39pm
  • MidnightMuse;

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    @ secrets-that-die
    Thank you so so much hun
    January 26th, 2015 at 03:55am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Aw I'm loving this story so much. Can't wait for more of it :)
    January 26th, 2015 at 03:47am
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    @ Yellowpokadots
    Thank you so so much! ^_^
    January 26th, 2015 at 03:32am
  • Yellowpokadots

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    This is a really good story. I like it a lot!
    January 26th, 2015 at 03:04am
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