I really think you've got Castiel's style down. His ignorance of how humans work is so adorable and the way he interacts with Dean is something I'm sure we all want to see on the actual show. That being said, I would suggest going back over and editing some structural and grammatical errors. There wasn't anything so bad that I couldn't get past, but just for aesthetics..
And one other thing just because Dean is my favorite character, Castiel wouldn't be able to run his fingers through his hair because Dean always keeps it short. Just saying. I'd rely like to see how this story ends..
Ahh I love this because I definitely ship dean and Castiel and Cas is my favorite character probably of all time. I love their bond in this story. Great job :) there will be more right?
That being said, I would suggest going back over and editing some structural and grammatical errors. There wasn't anything so bad that I couldn't get past, but just for aesthetics..
And one other thing just because Dean is my favorite character, Castiel wouldn't be able to run his fingers through his hair because Dean always keeps it short. Just saying.
I'd rely like to see how this story ends..