First off, I would like to apologize for how long this has taken me to read and judge this for the contest.
Okay, let me just start with... Wow. This story just had me wanting to cry and punch Kellin and sooth poor Victor in one fell swoop. It was just purely amazing, and now I'm going to pray that you make a sequel to this, even though you probably won't because you want that air of mystery of maybe. And I really like that. You don't have to tell me that they get together or not. It's just... it would be a nice mid-winter present to Felix. I'm really selfish, so pay no attention to the man behind the curtain
There's just one editing thing that I noticed:
Even if something happens, even if we have another fallout, I will still always have this short but perfect moment: I believe fall-out is either two words or a hyphenated word, depending on the situation.
Overall, I think you did a fantastic job with this. I was like, Don't you dare make them not work together because. Kellic. But I think your story was just so perfect overall. It deserves more than one comment, at this point (a very late comment at that, unfortunately). More Kudos because you deserve it. I can't wait to delve into something more of yours, especially if they're at all like this story. Keep up the great work!
Okay, let me just start with... Wow. This story just had me wanting to cry and punch Kellin and sooth poor Victor in one fell swoop. It was just purely amazing, and now I'm going to pray that you make a sequel to this, even though you probably won't because you want that air of mystery of maybe. And I really like that. You don't have to tell me that they get together or not. It's just... it would be a nice mid-winter present to Felix. I'm really selfish, so pay no attention to the man behind the curtain
There's just one editing thing that I noticed:
Even if something happens, even if we have another fallout, I will still always have this short but perfect moment: I believe fall-out is either two words or a hyphenated word, depending on the situation.
Overall, I think you did a fantastic job with this. I was like, Don't you dare make them not work together because. Kellic. But I think your story was just so perfect overall. It deserves more than one comment, at this point (a very late comment at that, unfortunately). More Kudos because you deserve it. I can't wait to delve into something more of yours, especially if they're at all like this story. Keep up the great work!