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  • StarAngel171565

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    OMG I love this story! I am so hooked on it that I read it all in a day! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Wow Smile
    September 19th, 2015 at 07:31am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    OMG WHATS HE GONNA TELL HER?! HOW DOES LILY NOT KNOW TATE IS EVIL?!?! Update soon please!!!
    September 18th, 2015 at 09:53am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    UGGG THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!!! I was in hell all this last chapter waiting for something sketchy to happen because of fucking David. PLEASE UPDATE DOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
    September 14th, 2015 at 06:27am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    UGGG THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!!! I was in hell all this last chapter waiting for something sketchy to happen because of fucking David. PLEASE UPDATE DOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
    September 14th, 2015 at 06:24am
  • St-Jimmy

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    Really, really great chapter! I loved it! I was so scared when they couldn't find Majesty, cause of the thing in the other chapter... Can't wait to read more!
    September 11th, 2015 at 01:31pm
  • Earthtophoebe

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    @ robs
    Thank you!
    September 10th, 2015 at 08:20am
  • Earthtophoebe

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    @ robs
    Thank you!
    September 10th, 2015 at 08:14am
  • robyn.

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    @ Earthtophoebe
    Happy Birthday! Sorry if it's late Smile xx
    September 9th, 2015 at 08:49pm
  • AJ9

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    Loved it! I can't wait for more and yes, I'd love to read another a7x fic of yours.

    Please update again soon xxx
    September 9th, 2015 at 05:45pm
  • Total Nightmare

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    Jesus, Daniel is completely nuts! How can he get away with his actions!? I'm still hoping someone will catch them and find out their plan before they can hurt any of the guys...
    This last chapter was absolutely adorable, though. Zacky and Lils are obviously in love with each other, and that's just fantastic. The birthday party was incredibly sweet too. I can't even imagine how happy Lils must have felt :)
    Loved it! Please update as soon as you can!!
    September 9th, 2015 at 10:55am
  • Earthtophoebe

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    I love this story so much. The last chapter you posted was on my actual birthday Wink
    September 9th, 2015 at 08:51am
  • Earthtophoebe

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    I love this story! You posted that chapter on my actual birthday as well Wink
    September 9th, 2015 at 08:42am
  • Anishinoda1986

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    Ok this chapter was lovely and cute...... (and I love that but.....) tell me that something dramatic is gonna happen! !!!!!!
    September 9th, 2015 at 01:41am
  • AJ9

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    I hope Julia and Lils will be ok. I hope nothing too bad happens to them. Please let Daniel and David get caught before they can do anything too bad. Looking forward to more of this fantastic story soon xxx
    September 5th, 2015 at 02:25pm
  • shootbackholywater

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    Words cannot even describe how much I love this!! The way you write Zacky is just...ugh so perfect! Not to mention hot!! Please update soon, I read this in one day it's just so addicting!
    August 24th, 2015 at 07:14pm
  • xmissjajiaix

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    I liked how Charlie gave Zacky permission, that's so cute!
    And I hope ZV remembers to delete those videos off of Matts' phone before giving it back. Haha. Can't wait for the next update! :)
    August 20th, 2015 at 02:15pm
  • Total Nightmare

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    Ooh, I loved this chapter! Charlie is awesome. I'm glad Zacky got to know him and talk to him. His nervousness in the beginning was also funny x)
    Him and Lils were adorable, as always. I'd like her to move in with him. It would be a big step, but it would be great.
    Oh, absolutely adored Jimmy running away with the prize ahahah!
    Great update! Please post another one soon!
    August 20th, 2015 at 09:14am
  • Lucyy Jayy

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    Noooooooooooo!!!!!! DON'T KILL HER OR THE CHILD!!!!
    August 7th, 2015 at 05:47am
  • spotiedotie

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    Scare her, hurt her........ BUT DO NOT KILL HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 5th, 2015 at 08:25am
  • Total Nightmare

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    Gotta say I was kind of expecting that reaction coming from Lils, regarding Zacky's invite for her to go to London with him. But I was kind of hoping that she would end up going with him. With David and Daniel's plan going on I'm sure nothing good will happen with her all by herself... Please don't let anything bad happen to Julia, though. She can be scared or something like that, but I don't want anything happening to her or the baby. Loved the hospital part, though, especially their comments ahahah!
    Please update soon!
    August 4th, 2015 at 12:27am