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  • chahakyeon

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    I hope you can update soon! I'm still really curious about what's to come in this story! :)
    March 13th, 2015 at 08:09am
  • chahakyeon

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    Ahh, I'm on the edge of my seat reading this right now! I don't know who Takah is but I don't like him :/

    I hope Alexander can find Raknah soon and I hope that she isn't hurt. This story is giving me too many feelings haha!
    February 15th, 2015 at 06:32am
  • chahakyeon

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    OH MY GOD! I was not expecting this, wow!!
    February 6th, 2015 at 11:57pm
  • chahakyeon

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    Thank you so much for updating! I'm hoping his mystery man will shed some light on Raknah's back story!
    February 6th, 2015 at 06:57am
  • random.ninja

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    This is amazing, I am really intrigued by the characters especially Raknah. I'd love to know who she is, or what her backstory is. Update soon!
    February 2nd, 2015 at 10:22pm
  • Famous Friend.

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    I really love their interactions so far. Like they're not both so sure about each other but they no option but to stay together and I just can't wait to see what will happen once they start to get to know each other better.
    And I also agree with @chahakyeon I really want to know more about Raknah and her backstory.
    February 2nd, 2015 at 07:12pm
  • Famous Friend.

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    Double.
    February 2nd, 2015 at 07:11pm
  • chahakyeon

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    Ahhh I cannot express how much I love this story so far! I only wish that each chapter was longer as I really don't want to stop reading! The characters are really interesting and I'd love to learn more about who the girl is!
    February 2nd, 2015 at 03:26am
  • chahakyeon

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    Ahhh I cannot express how much I love this story so far! I only wish that each chapter was longer as I really don't want to stop reading! The characters are really interesting and I'd love to learn more about who the girl is!
    February 2nd, 2015 at 03:25am
  • Call_me_Dot

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    I love that the female is the strong charger in this story!
    January 30th, 2015 at 10:04pm
  • nearly witches.

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    Your first line, oh man. Instant hook. I'm a massive sucker for anything that's even remotely action-based and that first line instantly caught my attention. It's all so very mysterious and quick and over in such a rush that I'm just dying to know more!

    I wanna know who this 'her' is! She's now popped up a few times and I'm really interested to see what she's all about. I'm assuming she's the protection that the title makes a nod to, so I'm really excited for that. Fiction needs more badass girls looking after the guys, haha!

    So far, I'm really enjoying this! I really can't wait to see where the entire thing goes as a whole because she seems to be saving him from everything, so I absolutely want to know exactly what her deal is! Keep going, you're doing an awesome job!
    January 29th, 2015 at 11:07pm
  • Famous Friend.

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    I hate that it's only 100 words because I just want to keep reading it!
    But I love this story and the whole concept, especially because the damsel in distress is actually a prince, we don't see that too often.
    Can't wait for the next update!
    January 29th, 2015 at 01:39am