I really love their interactions so far. Like they're not both so sure about each other but they no option but to stay together and I just can't wait to see what will happen once they start to get to know each other better. And I also agree with @chahakyeon I really want to know more about Raknah and her backstory.
Ahhh I cannot express how much I love this story so far! I only wish that each chapter was longer as I really don't want to stop reading! The characters are really interesting and I'd love to learn more about who the girl is!
Ahhh I cannot express how much I love this story so far! I only wish that each chapter was longer as I really don't want to stop reading! The characters are really interesting and I'd love to learn more about who the girl is!
Your first line, oh man. Instant hook. I'm a massive sucker for anything that's even remotely action-based and that first line instantly caught my attention. It's all so very mysterious and quick and over in such a rush that I'm just dying to know more!
I wanna know who this 'her' is! She's now popped up a few times and I'm really interested to see what she's all about. I'm assuming she's the protection that the title makes a nod to, so I'm really excited for that. Fiction needs more badass girls looking after the guys, haha!
So far, I'm really enjoying this! I really can't wait to see where the entire thing goes as a whole because she seems to be saving him from everything, so I absolutely want to know exactly what her deal is! Keep going, you're doing an awesome job!
I hate that it's only 100 words because I just want to keep reading it! But I love this story and the whole concept, especially because the damsel in distress is actually a prince, we don't see that too often. Can't wait for the next update!