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  • andybsgrapedog

    andybsgrapedog (100)

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    You should jump a couple years for a couple of chapters do like 5 yrs old, then 10, then 15 when she possibly realizes she loves him
    March 29th, 2015 at 12:56am
  • shilocoulter

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    @ andybsgrapedog
    I'm wondering where I should go in the next chapter? Any ideas? I would greatly appreciate it.
    March 25th, 2015 at 10:00pm
  • andybsgrapedog

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    Please update soon this is already a beautiful story I love the start
    March 25th, 2015 at 03:34pm
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