I Met a Boy - Comments

Awww

This is so adorable, well the end at least, it's very well written, and it's a rush of emotions all at once, but it's great. Well done.

It was such a great way to right this, so you definitely made the right choice to change it!

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
Thank you very much. I'm a massive fan of spoken word poetry, and as I was writing it, I kept rereading it like a poem so I changed it a bit so it read like a poem :)

@ Don'tFearTheReaper
Thank you very much. I'm a massive fan of spoken word poetry, and as I was writing it, I kept rereading it like a poem so I changed it a bit so it read like a poem :)

@ JamieAllOver.
I wasn't sure what I expected when I wrote it haha, but thank you

This was ridiculously sad, in ways. But absolutely adorable. I liked the way that you set this up like a poem, with each stanza being a new set of disappointments. It was just absolutely a beautiful way write this.

idk what i was expecting but it wasn't this and i loved it