Ain't No Rest for the Wicked - Comments

This was such a good story! Even though it was short, you told it very well. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

Who didn't complain about a skinny Zaky, her or the guards? She gave in to easily. she shouldn't have said shit.

Wow, didn't see that coming. At first I wondered whether the guys had set her up or not. I'm going to miss this. Molly is such an intriguing character and you've portrayed her in such a way that I want to dislike her but I can't because I want to know more about her. Why she is the way she is, what makes her tick, etc.

Noooo, I don't want it to end! I can tell the ending will be sad. But I got tissues ready, so I'm prepared...

Ugh she should have shot him!! That would at least been best part so far!

I'm sad this is ending soon! Molly is such an intriguing character, and is love to delve into her past more. I was cracking up that all the guys were afraid of her, but I guess with her attitude, it's understandable. Piss her off or stop holding your own and she'd have no qualms about killing you, history be damned. Looking forward to seeing how this all wraps up since I have a couple different scenarios in my head.

Ok

Ignore.

Wow! Nothing has really happened. You think something good will happen in less than a week?

Love it, but it's so short! I want more!
Molly is really bitchy, is that how she is or is that because of something that has happened in the past? She's a really cold girl, I wanna know why. Update soon! :)

Dude, this is impossibly hard for me. I'm so in love with Zacky stories, but I can't get into something this short. I fly through these chapters in about 30 seconds- 1 minute each.

UGH. Cool idea though.

I am such a bad commenter. Sorry!

I'm still loving this and the almost teaser-like quality of the short chapters. After the week I've had, these are about all I can handle most days. I can't wait to find out more about Molly, but I'm a little surprised she's so snippy w/Zacky. Maybe that's just the way she is, though. Given that this wasn't exactly the career path she'd planned on, maybe that's where some of her anger is stemming from. Or maybe I'm just reading into things too much which is highly possible.

"I wonder how old Bry is doing?"

I really like this so far! I love that each chapter only has 100 words or so... It's different! Can't wait to read more.

The first chapter got me interested and now I'm more curious. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I don't know how you do it, but you always manage to suck me in and leave me wanting more. Really excited about this one, though I'm contemplating only reading once a week so I'm not disappointed when I read each chapter and there isn't more.

I like the premise of 100 word chapters, though. Not sure I could ever manage, but it's a cool concept. Each word is going to be so important, and I'm looking forward to seeing how you convey so much with so little.