Remember Me - Comments

Let's fucking discuss how I can't tell if I'm crying or sweating or maybe both because if anyone smacked my ass like that either I'm going to lose it right there and fall in love OR I'm going to punch them in the mouth and there is just no in between. I think we know that Patrick smacking my ass would literally just like I would sell my soul to have that happen honestly. So. Fucking. Perfect.

Let's fucking discuss how I can't tell if I'm crying or sweating or maybe both because if anyone smacked my ass like that either I'm going to lose it right there and fall in love OR I'm going to punch them in the mouth and there is just no in between. I think we know that Patrick smacking my ass would literally just like I would sell my soul to have that happen honestly. So. Fucking. Perfect.

I. CAN'T. BREATHE. THE DRESSING ROOM SCENE IS JUST. MMMMMM. IDK WHAT ELSE TO EVEN SAY I CAN'T FORM WORDS BYE

Okay but seriously the whole kicking the shoe thing is perfect because fuck yeah I would be jumpy and flustered because who wouldn't be thinking about Patrick Kane and how well he fucked them like YES. IT WOULD DRIVE ME NUTS.

Shaw... I love him more than anything but I would stick a puck in his mouth to shut him up haha. Poor Patrick. And Johnny defending him. Literally best friend goals.

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. The thought of bending over a desk like bye. The aggression.. the face. Btw I like how he had his feet kicked up on the desk? Like oh.. are you comfortable? Dammit Patrick Timothy

Writing on the mirror because fucking BAD ASS BITCH. FUCK ME SIDEWAYS. I don't know if I would ever be able to be strong enough to leave after getting fucked like that. mmmmmmmm.

And finding a certain captain at besties apartment? NAUGHTY. It's okay though because cutest couple award goes to them and that's a fact. Thanks.

CLEANING ACTUALLY DISTRACTS ME THOUGH. ACCURATE.

Writing on the mirror because fucking BAD ASS BITCH. FUCK ME SIDEWAYS. I don't know if I would ever be able to be strong enough to leave after getting fucked like that. mmmmmmmm.

And finding a certain captain at besties apartment? NAUGHTY. It's okay though because cutest couple award goes to them and that's a fact. Thanks.

CLEANING ACTUALLY DISTRACTS ME THOUGH. ACCURATE.

Yeah, you should write more dominant Kaner.

I love this so much. This chapter was intense but so good! I can't wait for the sequel!

WOWZA!!! THAT WAS INTENSE!!!

Alright, that was good. Now more, please.

Poor Shawzy!!! Lol.

Ahh I can't believe he tracked her down! Can't wait to learn more about their history together. I kinda hope she doesn't go to his game. I kinda like him to chase her a bit more first before she gives in.

I can't even explain how much I absolutely adore this store. So fantastic, I can't wait for the next update :)

I am really feeling this story. I hope that you continue this story and keep progressing.

One of my favourite stories! Ugh, these two kids!

Love, love this story!!

Wowza!!! That was some dream!!

That was unbelievably hot! I think I would sell my soul to have Patrick Kane spank my ass and talk dirty to me like that hahaha. Can't wait for more!