Beside You - Comments

  • keigo takami.

    keigo takami. (205)

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    I really like this story, it's a shame you kind of abandoned it. :( You're a very talented writer, I'm craving for me tbh. I did kind of chuckle at the fact/idea of Ami and Michael meeting just by her getting hit by his car, but I guess "fate" works like that. I definitely understand Ami's reaction, I think anyone could, but if it was Michael, I'd probably let it slide. I also kind of find it funny that they literally bump into each other whenever they find themselves to each other (the car, her walk back home). Overall, I'd love to read more if you get the chance because I'm really excited to see what happens between Ami and Michael. :)
    July 12th, 2018 at 04:09pm
  • broknheartparade

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    @ Forgetful-Insomniacs
    Aaah thank you! That's what I was going for a bit ahaha. I just haven't used the layout maker in yeeears. Lol. Now to just make a banner or something and it will be perfect uwu
    January 31st, 2015 at 10:28pm
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    the layouts actually quite nice simple yes and don't get me wrong changing it is fine I'm just saying it's really easy on the eye
    January 31st, 2015 at 12:20pm