I'm Preying on You Tonight - Comments

Love this. Praying for the rest one day maybe... ❤️

She's a tough cookie.

@ pawnsinplay
I will tell you right now that i just couldn't write it. I can't get into the mindset to write that kind of scene in fiction based on zero physical experience and the fact that is never want to be a trigger for anyone who has been through it. What i wrote in the last chapter is as descriptive as it gets. I'm about halfway through the next chapter too, so hopefully you won't have to wait long.

So...to be perfectly honest, I'm going to have a really hard time reading the rape scenes. I struggled with what was in this chapter. Nothing against you, I just can't. For personal reasons. That aside, this chapter was amazing. I'm terrified for Sarah and waiting for Matt to find those bastards and unleash hell on them. And I can't wait for Brian's story!

So I just found this and I love it! This is one of the best AUs I've read in a while. Keep up the great work!

Yay, you're back! Loved this :)

@ pawnsinplay
I know, right? The feels!

So everything Johnny said just broke my heart. The guys have been through so much (not that I expected any different, considering their profession) and I can definitely understand how that would just break a person. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more!

So everything Johnny said just broke my heart. The guys have been through so much (not that I expected any different, considering their profession) and I can definitely understand how that would just break a person. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more!

@ pawnsinplay
I've been thinking about it, trying to pay it out in my mind and figure out what order i want the series to go in. The problem is that i need to get a good five or six more chapters of this one cranked out and posted before i get to Brian and Emmerson because their story beginning is going to overlap worth Matt and Sarah. If i post it too soon, it'll give things away. Glad you liked this last one though, I'm working on the next one slowly but surely.

In no way could this ever disappoint! I feel like I need to take a cold shower after all that steaminess though lol I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! And I ALSO can't wait for the sequel...any chance that can happen any time soon? *wiggles eyebrows*

Loved the update a lot of action. the dialogue between her mother and cousin was funny! This had me cracking up! Can't believe she asked those questions in front of Sarah's mom! Thanks for the update, can't wait to see what you have next

@ pawnsinplay
I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on the next chapter right now. I also put up a new Brian story. It's only the prologue but i just can't seem to help myself. So, check it out, you know, if you're interested.

Two chapters, weeeeeeee! So good. SO good. And the conversation between Sarah and her mom and sister cracked me up. Thanks for updating!

Poor Rachel. I hope the guys find her and keep her out of trouble. Though, staying with Zacky, she's gonna find herself in a DIFFERENT kind of trouble, isn't she?

And holy moses! HOLY. MOSES. Sarah and Matt. That was hothothot and need I say long overdue. Loved it!

Matt was whistling when he walked away. Heck yes! That's how shit gets done!

I'm sorry you couldn't go visit your hubby. I hope you can soon!

That totally sucks you couldn't see your husband! I live in cali, all I got to say is the weather here has been crazy. It's suppose to be in the high 90's all week!! Are you going to A7X concert at the soaring eagle casino? Good update, can't wait to read the next chapter

Please update, im in love with the way you write ❤️

Yes, Sarah, you are screwed. So very, very screwed and every second of it is amazing! Love this! Can't wait to see how Matt and Brian and Vince handle those twats