Until We Meet Again - Comments

I've been away from Mibba for a while, but coming back to so many great updates is great, and this is totally one of them!

This seems like the perfect example of why communication is key in any kind of friendship or relationship, Gerard is going on thinking that Jordan is better off without him :(

I hope you update soon! xxx

@ UnNamedStoryTeller

@ HeatherMayte!

Thank you for your comments, I promise I'll be updating in the next few days.

@ TaraJanee

I'm really happy you've liked this story and I understand when you say you're used to read Frerards, but there's actually a few good Gerard/ OFC stories here on mibba! Thank you for your comment, I'll be updating in the next few days!

@ St-Jimmy

@ Michael Westen

I totally understand, and agree, with what you've said about the story pace. It has been one of my major problems with this story, if not the biggest one, since I want the readers to know what happens and how their relationship develops over the time without having any big time gapes, but then it ends up leaving the story boring and slow moving.
Thank you for your honest comments!

I love this so much!
I can't wait for the next updates! I really hope you're still working on this story because it's amazing! I really hope Gerard gets rid of Katherine she seems like bad news! Mikey is so sweet I love how you've portrayed him. I hope Gerard gets back to being his old self but I hope Jordan doesn't forgive him so easily! I expect some major ass kissing!!
I have subbed and recommended!!

This is actually kind of sad, because Gerard sort of really got screwed up along the way and was probably thinking the whole time that Jordan was having this wonderful and happy life. I don’t want them to keep just skimming each other and not ever being together, cause I think they mean so much to each other that nobody else could ever really be their soul mate! ☹ Update?!

Okay so to be honest, I haven’t ever actually read a story with Gerard and an OC before, and I was a little skeptical to do so as well (usually I’ve just read Frerards, or have read Gerard in stories featuring other MCR members), but I was very, very pleasantly surprised with this story. The writing is very convincing, and I felt like it was a really fantastic portrayal of Gee. I fell quickly in love with Jordan’s character, and I think their relationship is incredibly convincing. It’s very real and something that people can relate to. Especially the way that Jordan and Gee find it hard to tell each other about their girlfriend/boyfriend, and almost feel like it’s gonna upset the other. Also, the feels when Gee and Jordan started to drift and he was drinking. It was so awkward and down to earth! I seriously can’t wait for more, please update soon!

This story is really well written and I'm liking it so far. I noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there, mainly to do with a change of tense in the middle of sentence (this happens in ch. 14 at least once), but other than that it's very good on that front. I like the character development, and I'm interested to see where you're going with this - I do agree with the previous commenter a bit, it's sometimes a little difficult to stick with, possibly because the pace can lag a little bit at times. Other than that, I'm really enjoying it! :)

This story is really well written and I'm liking it so far. I noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there, mainly to do with a change of tense in the middle of sentence (this happens in ch. 14 at least once), but other than that it's very good on that front. I like the character development, and I'm interested to see where you're going with this - I do agree with the previous commenter a bit, it's sometimes a little difficult to stick with, possibly because the pace can lag a little bit at times. Other than that, I'm really enjoying it! :)

I'm not sure what it is but I just couldn't get into this story. I do like the idea of it though. You also wrote out the dialogue and descriptions really well, so maybe it's just the pace of it that's giving me a problem. I don't remember seeing any grammar problems or spelling mistakes. Good luck with the rest of this.

This is a great story.

Ah man, it sounds like Gerard is on the path to self-destruct mode! Poor Jordan, all she seems to receive from Gerard is pain, and he doesn't even mean to hurt her! :( I like how you've weaved your story line in with the formation of MCR, I'm eager to find out where this will take Jordan and Gerard

Well I'm looking forward to finding out what happens! I'm interested in where this is going for Jordan and Gerard...

You don't sound pushy! I'm glad you're excited to read more! I wrote a note on my last update explaining that I have no internet connection because I've moved house, unfortunately British telephone/wifi companies are THE worse and are SO slow! I haven't had connection for a month now! I'm currently using my 3G on my mobile :'( HOPEFULLY this will change on Wednesday! I have chapters written on my laptop, just need to connect it to the internet. I'm sorry!

@ ouijagraph

I guess Jordan decided to give him a rough time. Things won't always be this bad, but it doesn't mean that they'll be good either...

On another note, when are you going to update your story? I'm looking forward to read what's going to happen next and I don't mean to be pushy, but you haven't updated in a while

Gerard deserved that, but oh my god it's breaking my heart! I'm glad Gerard apologised, even if it didn't have the outcome he might have wanted. Maybe losing Jordan will make him want to make things right! Xx

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Ah man, I feel so bad for Jordan! Being kept in the dark is horrible... especially about something like that! Oh Gerard

I'm so excited for what ever is gonna happen next... I like the sound of drama

Urgh Gerard! Please open up to Jordan! He seriously needs to get his ass in gear and sort this out...

@ Shelbysaurusrex
I don't think that's going to be that easy...

Gerard! You do have a problem! Seriously, talk to Jordan. Fall in love. Get married. Be happy!

Aah, he deserved that. Stupid Gerard and his big mouth. I hope he comes crawling back to her like he should for being a massive jerk.

I love this so much! I wonder how or if Gerard's going to redeem himself after that one... ouch! Looking forward to your next update!