I'll Always Come For You - Comments

I swear I fucking read this and commented this already but I guess not! This is brilliant, I absolutely love it! I love the fact you put their accents in, your writing style is amazing. I've got to go back to reading Cherokee Rose I haven't read it in so long! You're awesome chick!

Oh my god *is staring at this like it is the most beautiful thing she has ever read* this is absolutely phenomenal! I really feel like mine comes in second place to this, holy shit! Just the raw detail and emotion and you are much better with their accent coming into play than I am. This was probably the coolest one shot I've read ever! And I may have to read it a lot more before I'm done! Thank you so much!