I really hope you decide to continue this story! Mibba needs more Dylan stories!
I love the way Kansas and Dylan are so friendly with each other - you can tell that they have been close for a long time just from their conversations and the way they talk about missing one another. You can really see the connection between them and I hope Kansas gets the courage to tell Dylan how she really feels! I really don't like Gracie - she needs to go away fast. You can tell that Kansas was really jealous, and for good reason! Gracie needs to back off!
I love the way Kansas and Dylan are so friendly with each other - you can tell that they have been close for a long time just from their conversations and the way they talk about missing one another. You can really see the connection between them and I hope Kansas gets the courage to tell Dylan how she really feels! I really don't like Gracie - she needs to go away fast. You can tell that Kansas was really jealous, and for good reason! Gracie needs to back off!
I love this so much so far! Please keep writing!