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  • Pen'sbestfriend12

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    I absolutely love this. The repetition is poetic. I love the darkness in the story and I could picture it so clearly. I especially love the closing line!
    February 13th, 2015 at 05:32am
  • BobbyR

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    I could see a little bit of poe in their. I really could feel the darkness the man held over himself. Thanks for the read.
    February 12th, 2015 at 11:16pm
  • Ririe

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    I hope you enjoyed my little story. I would appreciate hearing any feedback.
    February 12th, 2015 at 12:12pm
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