Desperate for You - Comments

EXCUSE ME ANNIE, MY BESTIE...

WTF THIS IS PERFECT.

How have I not read this before now? How have I not taken the time to discover your amazing talent and this story. Anyways, I'm obsessed and I love it so much and I can't wait to read more about Harry and Abigail.

I like that there's a scary factor to it, but there's also the two of them just trying to help each other out. As much as it's not a good thing that Abby was thrown in the basement with Harry for trying to escape with him, it's better than her trying to control Harry and him just hating her. I think the fact that they're stuck together now is going to make them closer and realize that, in the moment anyways, they're pretty much all each other's got.

Okay, I'm going to read more of your stories now because I can only imagine how perfect they all are if they're anything like this one. We'll talk soon via messages, and I sincerely apologize for not having read your work sooner. This is really, really unique and well-written and fantastic.

xx Ari

THIS STORY STILL HAS ME GOING AS WILD AS IT DID WHEN IT FIRST BEGAN LIKE I'M GOING TO SCREAM AND LIGHT MYSELF ON FIRE AND JUMP OFF A CLIFF G O O D B Y E I AM SCREAMING MY LORD

(i'm about to take a nap because i'm really tired from this headache meedicine so excuse any oddities and rambling this comment may have )

FIVE AND A HALF HOURS OF TAPE I'M GONNA BE SICK N O

I JUST WANT ABBY AND HARRY TO BREAK FREE, WHUP SOME ASS, AND GET THE HELL OUTTA DODGE BECAUSE HELLLLL IF I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT READING THAN GOOD GOD IMAGINE WHAT THEY'RE GOING THROUGH W HY

THEN EFFY AND LIAM STICKING TOGETHER HI SHAN DON HER SO S HE K N E W S H E W A S N O T A L O N E MY HEART NOPE NOPE NOPITY NOPE AIYAH

NIALL AND LOUIS AND ZAYN DOING WHAT THEY CAN WHAT IS MY HEART DOING IT IS IMPLODING

THEY ARE TORTURING HARRY BY WATERBOARDING HIM I'M GOING TO TEAR MY HAIR OUT IT'S OKAY I'VE BEEN CONSIDERING A HAIRCUT SINCE THE FIFTH GRADE NOW'S A GOOD A TIME AS ANY TO START BY RIPPING IT OUT AYE

H A R R Y W A S S I N G I N G R E A D Y T O R U N BACKWARDS

A HOPEFUL SONG TURNED BACKWARDS IS NOT HOPEFUL

*drops to the ground*

*chokes*

i am deceased i love this story so much someone help lord pls i have been nothing but good pls collect mE I LOVE THIS SO MUCH ANNIE EEAAAH


^ me reading this whole story like

HOLY MOLEY THAT WAS FLAWLESS AND I THINK I'M READY TO JUST DIE! Harry singing Ready To Run backwards and Abby helping Harry and Liam and Effy helping eachother and aww!! This story is by far my favourite on Mibba!

Love you Annie dear :3

FIRST OF ALL, ANNIE, FIRST OF FREAKING ALL:

Oh my God. Oh my fuck. Oh my Lrod (;D) WHAT A CHAPTER. It was so intense, one hand was scrolling through the chapter and the other was clenched into a fist, ready to hit the git that was hurting Abby and Harry. That's how tightly you have my gripped in the claws of this amazing story.

Second of all:

Hours later, and the blows were still coming. “P-Please!” My throat was burning raw. I felt the world blurring around me. I was dizzy, my heart was slowing. I could feel it. A knock to my jaw, a kick to my side. The pain never had a chance to subside.

Poor, poor Abby. The man we're dealing with here is clearly a monster, so yeah, that's not fun for either of them, and I just wanna hug them so tightly and tell them it'll be okay and... *sighs* I'm rambling again, aren't I?

EITHER WAY, THIS IS EXCITING AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Hmmmm this sounds verry exciting, cant wait!

hngggggg this is so wild i love it.

"Keep talking, pretty boy. It's only going to get you hurt."



First we got the voice, the v o i c e and she's repeating it and the first thought I had was that the voice was in her head, I was like, oh hELL NO. And I wanted nothing more than for Harry to, like, sprout wings and tear outta that place okay leave and slice her in half with those angel wings he would no doubt have like. Well.

SCREAMING HARRY. POOR BBY SOMEONE LET HIM FREE.

“You will not leave until we wish you to. Understand, Harry?”

we



NOPNOPENOPENOPE.

Then I find out that someone's above her, like a horrific food chain with Harry clinging at the bottom and Abigail barely hanging onto the middle while this guy wraps the chain around his fingers and dangles the two of them over his preferred method of torture. Bed of nails, river of lava, whatever he likes. He's in charge. And this is all a mess and so terrifying. I love it.

“Take care of yourself as is necessary… You will return to torment him again in the morning.”

B YE

The parts where she's thinking about her sister, her family, it's so sad, my heart aches. I can't completely forgive her because bruh, she's torturing Harry, but it doesn't seem like she has a choice and it's so so sad.

HARRY'S SCREAMING AGAIN OH MY GOSH POOR THING.

she has to sleep completely dressed and made up because he gives her no choice wtf when is someone gonna tear him up.

". . .pressed a hand against his throat, pushing down an unexpected sob." the contradiction nope i can't

WHY DOES SHE HAVE TO HIT HIM ARE YOU NOT SATISFIED WITH HIM NO LONGER SCREAMING.

HE WAS CRYING NONNNONOOONO

HE'S ANGRY AND STRONG BUT WET CHEEKS OKAY DEAD GIVEAWAY

"Enough to know this was where it all had to stop."



(you are so welcome lovely lass! i adore where it's going, it's so incredible holy moly you're doing great )

(okay so i wrote a comment and mibba / my internet ate it. )

S U S P E N S E.

Fuuuuuu you have no idea how much I love dark fics, especially a dark One Direction fic because they are so rare (because you can't help but try and get all fluffy with the boys, y'know ) and it's even harder to find ones that are well done and I've foUND ONE SO WONDERFUL. It's only a few words in and I'm already hooked in, drawn to it, brought to the edge of my seat because I can't wait for more, I can't wait to see why he's here and who this demonic little lady is and I'm just so excited.

“That, I’m afraid, is on a need to know basis.”

okay so what we need to know eh.

“And you don’t need to know.”

WHATT EHFUCK

you cannot! lead him to think he's about to find out why he's been abducted and bound and then just drop some snark bombs like that like listen here girlfriend you can get ya hands offa him and ya facE AWAY FROM HIM HAVE YOU EVER HEARD OF PERSONAL SPACE YOU DARN DIRTBALL. HAVE YOU.

“Do you really want to know?”

UM NAH I THINK HE'S SATISFIED BEING IN STRANGE CONDITIONS WITH STRANGE LADIES THANKS FOR THE OFFER THOUGH.

(this is amazing and i'm so so excited for more of it! )