This story is no doubt something of my taste! Your writing style is very simple and you don't waste your page with lots of details! Also, the character development has been going extremely well since the first chapter, but I feel like I can already tell you Ari's different backstories with confidence, which is something that I can't say about a lot of stories. I also have to throw in the fact that the quirkiness of this "John" character is pretty hilarious. Honestly, I was about to spit out my water when he asked if he name was John as well. You are doing a fantastic job, and please keep it up!
P.S. I wanted to throw in here that I actually had a similar thing in one of my stories I'm writing. Girl in a coffee shop meets hot, mysterious guy.. How funny!
P.P.S (I know, shut up already, right?) I do NOT get on this site anymore at all, and I was wondering if you had a DeviantArt (or something else), where I could read this! Great job, again!
P.S. I wanted to throw in here that I actually had a similar thing in one of my stories I'm writing. Girl in a coffee shop meets hot, mysterious guy.. How funny!
P.P.S (I know, shut up already, right?) I do NOT get on this site anymore at all, and I was wondering if you had a DeviantArt (or something else), where I could read this! Great job, again!