Once Upon a Dream - Comments

So, I've just started reading this story and it is wonderful! I'm sorry to see it hasn't been updated in a while, but I'm sure many of us would like to see one :)

Hi! How are you, you've not updated in a while... Finals? I'm stuck in mine, it's a nightmare.

So cuuuuuteeeee!!!!! Harley and Jacky are so good together. Andy is still a bloody annoying git, though.

@ Electric-strawberry
It will be updated soon! I've been super busy with university lately but it's coming!

Love this story please update soon! :)

I'm so happy now that Jacky and Harley have imprinted and made it official between both clans. I'm glad that the two clans became one, because they are stronger together. I'm a tad bit nervous about Andy. I have the feeling that he is gonna do something so stupid to try and get Leda and Ryan or Jacky and Harley to break up. I was really shocked when you guys threw MIW into the mix. Total plot twist that I didn't see coming. But anywhore, I spent 5 hours getting caught back up so through all of that, I can gladly say, that I am so happy as to where this story is headed.

Ooh! Really interesting now... MIW? I'm wondering where it's going.

Ooh! Really interesting now... MIW? I'm wondering where it's going.

Badly written my ass! I loved it.. So that dream/alternate ending was really wierd and I think Lee is right about Harley having a think for Jacky. But in the end, it was an amazing update from both of you ladies.

Well, I don't think that Harley would say that he has a face that look like a butt... Because she totally want to suck his face, so... Even if she refuse to accept it.

Well, I don't think that Harley would say that he has a face that look like a butt... Because she totally want to suck his face, so... Even if she refuse to accept it.

@ Yuki-no-Chi
Thanks for the comment! :) we really appreciate it <3
Tune in to see jacky get called a buttface about a million more times ;D

Poor Jacky. Seriously, Harley is so mean to him... They would be adorable together.

@ foREVer-a-creature
Thanks for the comment!

I swear if Harley doesn't make it I will kill a whore! She has been strong this long, she can make it a bit longer. I really hope she drops the act around Jacky and falls for him. They would make a hella cute couple.

Oh shit! Hunters again? Hopefully they won't get run off like last time. Great chapter. I can totally see Leda starting to have feelings for Andy. And I could see Harley having feelings for Jacky.

I laughed my ass off when she knee CC in the balls. I just couldn't help it. But this was a good chapter. And I have to say you ladies are on a role with these updates.

@ foREVer-a-creature
Thank you so much! I was having a tough time getting it all out but I'm super happy you like it : )

That was a brilliant chapter. They way you portrayed the power flux was genius! I loved it!

Just found this story, and I am absolutly in love with it. I agree with Harley that it's not fair for her to be punished for Andy being an egotistical jackwagon! But I can see where Aurora is coming from. But I can't wait to see what happens next.