Elastic Heart - Comments

This story is so good!!!! I would love to read more of it. Especially since the show has progressed so much

The first chapter i was a bit confused thinking this would be slightly bad but you proved me wrong, The Bellamy Blake books I've already read have girls who hate him at first then when they realize they love him they choose to side with him even when they know he's in the wrong but where as in this book blaire likes him and knows she likes him but still goes with her own opinion

@ Lovealwaystata
That's so reassuring to hear because my heads been all over the place writing these past two chapters! I think I get what you mean about the writing making up for the timing of the kiss because even though it's been three days, they've spent a lot of time together? In the show we see Octavia and Atom speak for the first time and make out on the same bloody day so that's what put my mind at ease about the decision for them to kiss Plus you're right, this is a Bellamy/OC fanfiction so of course readers want them to eventually get into a relationship aha! I've also got things planned for the next few chapters which kind of needed them to have already kissed and taken that first sort of step so hopefully it all works out
Appreciate you commenting so much<3 p.s. If that's your only complaint I'll gladly take it!

I think the way you've written the timing into the story makes up for the kiss that may have been too early. I hope that makes sense. I don't think the kiss was too early, in my opinion, but I really hate reading a story that takes forever to get into the romance. Life is slow, I don't think stories need to be as well lol Anyway, I loved it! My only complaint is that the chapters end! :)

@ Lovealwaystata
I can't decided whether or not I think the kiss was too soon

With their relationship, I mean lol

With their relationship, I mean lol

Yay!! I'm all for the pace that you're going.

Sorry, it posted twice:/

@ Lovealwaystata
Thank you for commenting! The next chapter is already half written, but I do have a pretty busy morning ahead so I can't make any promises on it being posted today
But I can promise I will try my hardest to make sure it is<3

@ Levi melia
Thank you so much for telling me that! I'm conscious about making it more of a slow-growing relationship because I've read fanfictions in the past where they jump straight into relationships and it just doesn't seem as romantic or realistic to me...
But thanks again<3

I'm so in love with this story! More more more! <3

I'm loving this story! I like how you haven't just made them suddenly fall in love and become a couple straight away, yet you still show how their feelings are slowly developing

I'm loving this story! I like how you haven't just made them suddenly fall in love and become a couple straight away, yet you still show how their feelings are slowly developing