Turpentine Kisses & Mistaken Blows - Comments

  • Katie Mosing

    Katie Mosing (33815)

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    I absolutely love this summary! It paints a perfect picture of what their friendship is like, while giving us little facts about Bellamy at the same time. You can tell from the way that Raven lingers on all of these little things about him that there is some connection between the two of them that maybe she is not willing to admit. I also really like that it has an open-ended feeling with the line "And for now, that was enough." It was very poetic and I think it did a great job of getting the audience ready for what was to come. I can't think of anything that would need changing to make the summary better - it was great all around!
    July 10th, 2015 at 10:16pm
  • pocahontas.

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    I love this layout! It's perfect for the vibe of travel and really reinforces the summary (which is great, btw) I'm really interested to see where this will start and where it will end!
    June 30th, 2015 at 06:12am