Come Back to Me - Comments

Hey! I really like this. It's been a long while since I've been on this sight, because no one really seems to write anymore. I hope you update soon! I would love to have something to read again.

@ AJ9
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you're enjoying it. Receiving feedback always motivates me to keep writing and not give up :)

@ AJ9
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you're enjoying it. Receiving feedback always motivates me to keep writing and not give up :)

Enjoying this story. Hope you update again soon xxx

@ vttoonses
Thank you for your comment and feedback :)
And yes I do agree with the "slap" comment, it didn't really cross my mind until days later after I had posted the chapter up. I will be sure to keep your suggestions in mind when writing in the future :)

Just got turned on to your story today while I was working in a bookstore cafe. It is a very good story. It seems auto-biographical to an extent but that just makes it more interesting. Some small suggestions, there are some grammatical and wording issues. Nothing big, but a few places that could be cleaned up a little. Also, from a guy's point of view, we don't generally don't use "slap" as the verb when talking about removing a look from someone's face (in chapter 6). Not "macho" enough. "Wipe" or "knock" are more idiomatic, like, "his eyes glued to mine and I so wanted to knock his stupid smirk right off his face."

Looking forward to the next chapter!

@ deathbatc!nt
Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)

really enjoying this so far!!

I love it!!! I'm extremely excited to read more!! Feel free to read my story "Saved and Haunted"