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  • Laylylu

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    Worst cliffhanger! Need to know what happens!
    January 23rd, 2018 at 12:35pm
  • AJ9

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    This is getting really exciting now! Crazy Please update again soon. xxx
    March 7th, 2015 at 09:45am
  • Finsterella

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    Loved it and I can't stand marylin. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
    March 7th, 2015 at 07:51am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Can they stab her 50 fucking times and then behead her lmao. Loved this chapter filler. I seriously hope that wherever they run to, that they can live happily ever after. I also hope her wound doesn't get infected and she dies or something cuz then I'll be very sad and pissed lmao
    March 6th, 2015 at 04:43pm
  • simply amanda;

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    I loved it! I can't wait to see what happens next!
    March 6th, 2015 at 03:53pm
  • Lalaster

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    @ Finsterella

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    @ Bonnie Parker;
    Thank y'all so much!
    This update is kind of a filler.
    But soon the real shit is going to start going down!
    And, I cannot wait because it's going to get pretty interesting!
    March 6th, 2015 at 10:21am
  • simply amanda;

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    Loved it babe! I can not wait to see the next part and what happens.
    March 4th, 2015 at 01:19am
  • AJ9

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    Loving this! I'm starting to wonder if Marilyn has an agenda. Also, I'm beginning to feel sorry for Brian. I hope he escapes and helps the rest of the guys out. Please update again soon. xxx
    March 3rd, 2015 at 10:53pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    March 3rd, 2015 at 04:07pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Fuck yeah, woke up to two updates!!!!! I can't believe how fast and how quickly the cops arrived!! I was afraid she wouldn't make it. I don't understand why they keep that bitch Marylin with them and alive. I think they should kill her and be done with her already. Haven is my damn hero!! I love her! She's such a badass!!
    March 3rd, 2015 at 04:02pm
  • Finsterella

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    loved the updates!! i feel kinda bad for Brian. and what has the new warden so worried that she had to tase Brian? also marylin is being a fuckin' bitch about being shot at.but i cant wait for more.!!!
    March 3rd, 2015 at 11:09am
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    loved the updates!! i feel kinda bad for Brian. and what has the new warden so worried that she had to tase Brian? also marylin is being a fuckin' bitch about being shot at.but i cant wait for more.!!!
    March 3rd, 2015 at 11:08am
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    loved the updates!! i feel kinda bad for Brian. and what has the new warden so worried that she had to tase Brian? also marylin is being a fuckin' bitch about being shot at.but i cant wait for more.!!!
    March 3rd, 2015 at 11:08am
  • Lalaster

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    Thank you both so much!!
    Yay! y'all caught my hints. :) I can't tell what they're for though, not yet. Lol

    And, I hope that y'all like this update. I worked hard on it! :)
    March 3rd, 2015 at 06:25am
  • Finsterella

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    I agree with mrsmshadz she seemed a little to close to matt. But I love the update.
    March 2nd, 2015 at 06:21pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Omg!! I didn't subscribe, luckily I read your comment. I think that bitch Marylin has the hots for Matt and I don't fucken like it. I hope she dies soon lmao great update. Can't wait for more!!!
    March 2nd, 2015 at 07:16am
  • Lalaster

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    @ OMFGitsBeckiie

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    Thank you guys so much! I'm so glad that y'all liked it!
    I hope that y'all will like this update just as much. Lol :)
    I have big plans for this story, and I'm so happy to be writing for a 'free Haven' again. :D
    Arms
    March 2nd, 2015 at 05:41am
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    I loved this chapter. It had me giggling a bit. I can't wait to see what happens with them!
    March 1st, 2015 at 07:47pm
  • SynysterKitty113

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    Yay!! So I'm wondering what's next for them and also where Of. Ridge is. Can't wait for next update
    March 1st, 2015 at 06:44pm
  • simply amanda;

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    Loved it. I liked the part lining them up and all that. This was a great start. I can't wait to see more!
    March 1st, 2015 at 02:26pm