Furry Tale - Comments

@ Fighting Blaze
I would do the edit just so that its clear to everyone who is saying what etc.

I am on wattpad and know some people don't like people commenting on typos, comma misuse etc so initially I wasn't going to comment. But the second thing that I noticed that you may want to look at and it could be what you intended, and me just being a goof, but check thru some of the quotes, upon first reading, I had thought that some of the quotes may have been intended to be internal thoughts of the character. I could be wrong not sure? but wanted to mention :-P

@ AuthorCRMisty
Thanks for the feedback, also I promoted your book, so good luck with that, and quick question, due to your very helpful advice, should I just do quick edit of the chapter or should I leave as is?

For the Prologue, because you are introducing your characters, Rio, Mom, Bella, Tommy (Thomas) try to use their names to make it clear who is talking. Some parts where you mentioned "She" I wasn't sure if it was referring to Mom or Bella. Once the story starts to build and conversations are being had between 2, than I think its safe to use (he/she, him/her etc)