Devoted to the Girl - Comments

I love the innocent, casual setting of their interaction and how your magnificent description amplifies it.

Their interaction is so natural, yet so painful at the same time because you are so invested in Haru's feelings. The entire time I just wanted him to get to have his moment.

Tears filled my eyes, and gently begin to fall down my cheeks... She hated me. Baby no. The feelings you were able to evoke from me with those simple sentences had my heart dropping. JUST LOVE HIM OH MY GAH.

And then she does. This moment that he wants more than anything. So precious and perfect in your depiction and ability to make me feel along with them.

This is so beautiful.

What?! What?! A My Little Monster fanfic?! On Mibba?! Erin! You really made my day with this and not to mention you wrote it so beautifully! Haru and Shizuku were so in character! I can definitely imagine being a lost chapter of the manga or an episode of the anime! Short but beautiful! Thank you for writing such a sweet one shot of one of my favorite couples from My Little Monster. <3

@ Let Live Again;
Thank you!

@ SleepingSoundlyAwake
It's an anime one-shot.
Thank you for the comment.

This was pretty amazing, the banner/layout was flipping cool. The story line was really cute, I loved how he tried too hard or what was it, you try to hard? Or come on too strong. Something like that, you made me laugh out loud because I thought of something that happened to me. I loved the names, it looked like anime or something like that. I have no idea what it is but they were cute.

This is a lovely One Shot. I just wish I knew more about Anime or who the characters actually were but All in all this is a wonderful one shot it was so cute how nervous the girl got then the emotions towards the end, when the boy cried.

@ Divine Faery
Thank you so much for the comment.
And Haru is a boy.

I'm not familiar with My Little Monster but I thought this story was sweet, Haru was so cute and I felt bad when...I don't know if its a boy or a girl, that's the one thing I'm still confused about. But when Haru cried I wanted to cry too I'm happy Shizuku loves Haru back

(Let's try this again since Mibba refused to post my last comment)

I really like this, it's short and nicely written which is good :) It flows nicely, and the story as a whole is well written also

@ Alex Moore.
It looks awesome thanks to you!

I love to see the chapter in the lay-out!