Fall With Me. - Comments

@ tommo;
Haha, don't worry about the pronouns. I still don't know if I did that on purpose.
It seems like we always nerd out about each other's stories and such, so, you know. I appreciate every little comment.

I actually didn't see that coming you sneaky, sneaky lovely, you.
*quietly goes back to edit comment*

I wish I was as good at making up names. Probably one of the reasons I go for fanfiction more often and I don't even realize it.

Your writing is so wondrous and brings out so many emotions that I only feel it's right to leave a comment whenever I can; and to know that they have that effect on you makes me really happy, eee!

The fact that you were able to kill it in just 300 words is amazing and I just. You're so very welcome, lovely!

@ tommo;
Psst, Sawyer is a girl. Bet you didn't see that coming. Felix is sneaky, sneaky.
I like coming up with names. Names that aren't heard a lot. They make the story. And it's half the fun.
Ah, darling, you and your comments. They always make me all warm and fuzzy on the inside.
I'm still not sure how you're able to write that much about a three-hundred word oneshot, but I am greatly grateful for your support. Thank you.

(can i just take a moment to admire your character names like they're always so unique ahh)

"He had spent the evening bawling his eyes out as he watched Titanic. When I responded with a shrug of my shoulder. . ." This is such a wonderfully couple-y thing and it's so cute and yet I'm getting the strongest feeling that I'm going to end up in pain at the end of this oneshot. It's a great contrast, though, emotional twisted up with (what appears to be) emotionless.

UM JAEL'S GRUMBLES ARE LEADING TO THE PAIN I KNEW WAS COMING SHIT.

"I stared at him for a moment, then got to work packing my duffel bag."

um you seriously are not even making a fuss???? she's just letting the end happen like dammit dude what do you think you're doing i know you see no point in showing your love but-but-but she's not even trying or being the least bit stubborn or

dammitdammitdaMMIT

hE LOVES YOU SAWYER

FUCK THE LAST PARAGRAPH NOPE NOPE NOPEING MY WAY OUTTA HERE DAMMIT SAWYER DAMMIT I JUST JAEL IS PROBABLY SO I AM JUST OH MY GOD NO



(this was absolutely amazing and for you to create something so good is not unexpected but still so loved)