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  • DreamsInOblivion

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    I just wanted to say I've been enjoying this work so far (I'm on chap 9) however I am quite annoyed at the amount of slut shaming in this. For instance how Amber claimed she gained more respect for her boss just because she's only giving Pete her number. What's so wrong with sex for the sake of mutual pleasure between two consenting adults? Other instances of slut shaming was also all the comments along the lines of "I'm not that kind of girl!", and being insulted that god forbid a female choose to do something "impure" to her own body before marriage. Sorry this is kinda rant-y, I do enjoy this, as I've said I just get disappointed when the idea that individuals who have more sex are of lesser value than others gets perpetuated in the media...
    September 1st, 2016 at 05:50pm
  • bobobo

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    YEEESSS oh my god! As much as I love Patrick stump fics I think it's ballsy to end stories like this. I loved it. I can't wait for the sequel.
    July 8th, 2015 at 10:42pm
  • santi santi

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    Ahh!! Come on! That nearly killed me!
    July 8th, 2015 at 10:38pm
  • santi santi

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    Ahh!! Come on! That nearly killed me!
    July 8th, 2015 at 10:36pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    Uh oh. That's usually not good.
    June 8th, 2015 at 11:30pm
  • awwkwardmess

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    Yay! Great chapter. Cant wait for the next
    May 28th, 2015 at 10:25am
  • smbdynmdnbdy

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    Another great chapter. Well done! I need the next one asap. Liam's a dick.
    May 17th, 2015 at 06:33am
  • smbdynmdnbdy

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    Damn, girl. That was amazing! Keep updating please? And more smut omg. Anyway, a Pete and Angela story would be nice, but there could never be too many Patrick fics. Wink
    May 13th, 2015 at 03:48am
  • awwkwardmess

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    Still so great :)
    May 12th, 2015 at 07:26am
  • secrets-that-die

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    They're so adorable (: can't wait for the next one
    May 10th, 2015 at 11:21pm
  • awwkwardmess

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    Great chapter! Cant wait for the next
    May 8th, 2015 at 06:14am
  • smbdynmdnbdy

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    Such a cute chapter. Can't wait for the next update! Very Happy
    May 8th, 2015 at 04:24am
  • smbdynmdnbdy

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    Hot damn. Wink
    May 3rd, 2015 at 04:37am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Lovin it! :)
    May 3rd, 2015 at 12:58am
  • smbdynmdnbdy

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    HOLY SHIT TWO GREAT CHAPTERS. Keep it up, babyboo! Can't wait for the next update Wink
    April 26th, 2015 at 07:27am
  • ANS8812

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    Hey hi. I'm really enjoying this story....and the quick turnaround with the updates. Good job! Can't wait to read Pete and Angela's story too. Keep going, you're doing great :)
    April 26th, 2015 at 04:28am
  • Awkwardly Obscured

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    Loved the flashback! It's great to see what demons she had to battle back then. As well as her want to change. Also enjoyed how you put in ther how her old self was thrilled lol. It's so good!! Can't wait for the next update! :)
    April 25th, 2015 at 07:05am
  • UnNamedStoryTeller

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    Thank you!!
    I know it was a little short but I started working on the next chapter before I had to leave for work and it'll be a long one I promise Wink
    April 23rd, 2015 at 05:22pm
  • smbdynmdnbdy

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    More pleaaaaase!! Tbh I wanted it to be a bit longer, but you did SUCH an amazing job yet again. Can't wait for the next chapter! Mr. Green
    April 22nd, 2015 at 06:43am
  • Awkwardly Obscured

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    Yayyy an update! Love it! :) can't wait for the next one!
    April 21st, 2015 at 08:59pm
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