Children of Esteria - Comments

I think this is so interesting. There's the three eldest children who know their true identities and yet have to pretend they are these different people even when there's horrible talk about their parents, whereas the three youngest have no clue, and as shown with Ana, feel a resentment that it was kept from them for a long time when it gets revealed. That surely adds to the dynamic of the family and I would love to read more of this, if this is still active? It has been a while since the last update and I do hope it's being continued. The idea feels like it has so much potential that has yet to be revealed.

Oh my gosh yes <3 I'm so excited for where this story is going! Talia and Ana are both great characters, and I am super excited to see their involvment in the d'Auvay mystery. The only thing I would try to improve is the narrative, I think the tone for the two different centre points of view is a bit too similar in tone, they're both very formal. Try to relax and shake them up a bit?

Ana is so mischievous, I love it! Great update

Such an awesome concept! I'm hooked already, update soon guys!♥