I do have some constructive criticism. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy this story throughly, but I did notice a few mishaps.
You misspell words at times, example: "Oddly enough, I've heard that before," I scouffed-should be "Scoffed". Little bits here and there, nothing major.
Also, you repeat "My" in the beginning of story.
Overall, I love it. I will continue to read this. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!