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fifthghost
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Good job! I think it would get you more readers if you use paragraph breaks though!
May 11th, 2015 at 12:05am
PrincessMerrick
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haha thank you! i feel like alex and zack would definitely have the kind of relationship where they constantly take the piss out of each other :)
March 21st, 2015 at 11:53pm
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This was hilarious i loved their banter throughout the story
March 21st, 2015 at 08:48pm
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