Unhinged - Comments

WOW Star, I think i got a litter teary eyed at your positive feedback!! It means so much to me that you enjoyed the story so much, I really worked hard on this story and spent a long time writing it. I am actually already working on another Drinny story now! I also post on Fanfiction.net so if your interesting in reading it when i finally post you can subscribe to me on there, im not sure if you can subscribe to an author on here. Anyway again thank you sooo much. It will be hard to top this story/plot but ill be taking different approaches with each story i post so i hope they they keep pleasing the readers! @ Star

I've just read this story and it was phenomenal. Literally. This story blew my mind and I'm being dead serious when I say your story is WAY better than the actual movies. I'm serious, you're extremely talented. Don't ever let anyone tell you this story sucks because that's nonsense. I'm gonna be thinking about your story for weeks now, that's how good it is!

LOL wonderful! I've been working on the next chapter at a steady pace so it will be up A LOT sooner than the last one =) Thanks for the review, i love what hearing what the readers think!!!@ HawkGurl93

I liked it! It was good comic relief, dracos reaction was perfect

BWAHAHAA YES I know and to be honest, neither did I, but for some reason it came about. My mind kept thinking "Sometimes people turn to the person they least expected to find comfort" and so I built on that. What were your thoughts on it?@ HawkGurl93

Did not see that Narcissa thing coming

@ HawkGurl93
I'm sorry it seems to be dragging on =( Obviously not my intentions...... I DID NOT want to rush this part of the story and wanted to really have the readers feel the experience of what both Ginny and Draco are going through, I felt this was important. I hope the next chapter is more to your liking and I hope you will continue to follow the story. Thank you for your feedback HawkGurl !!!

I hope this wraps up and they get a happy ending soon. I like this but it's kind of dragging on. And I am sure you're busy, but the the slow updates with a repetitive story doesn't really work. I skim half the chapter because it's literally the same as the last. Hoping for something new in the next chapter.

@ HawkGurl93
YES! Thank you again so much for your feedback!!! I just love all my readers and am so glad you all are enjoying the story!!!

Ahhhh! That cliffhanger is killing me. But I love Draco right now and how he is slowly coming around to the idea.

@ HawkGurl93
My lips are sealed lol. Thank you so much for your comments HawkGurl, it means a great deal to me that you take the time to leave one

Feel bad for ginny, that was harsh. Did Draco get his memory modified?

@ HawkGurl93
thank you so much for the feedback.....It interesting to see everyone's take on the new developments with Luna and Harry...... The thing on Luna's arm is a burn (hmm) I guess everyone will have to wait to see what its all about lol. Thanks again for your feedback I love to hear what you guys think!!!

Love this. Draco and ginny are so cute together. Is Luna a death eater? She has something on her arm..?

@ Storm_N_Jayson
Thank you so much for the review!!! It means so much that you took the time to give me feedback. This is my first fanfic and yes I can agree with you about some paragraph parting and comma/period use. I think my later chapters turned out a lot better grammatically than the first couple. Thank you again and I will continue to update.

Hi! Okay, first off, I love this book. Harry Potter for life! Plus, I do ship Draco & Ginny—One of my favourite Harry Potter Shippings.

I just want to give you some constructive criticism. :) These are not meant to be harsh but hopefully, I'm helpful.

You could shorten the paragraphs, as the large paragraphs tend to slow the pace. I mean, don't get me wrong, you are amazing at imagery and description but information gets piled plus it gets a bit... Slow, making me want to skim rather than read.

You tend to miss periods, commas etc, making it blunt. But, overall, it was enjoyable. I will continue to read as I throughly enjoyed it. Keep on writing! :D

-Jayson