Just Be Me - Comments

I can't stop rereading this...... I feel as thought there needs a be s full story to back this up :)

This was simutaneously hot and cute, which is weird! Haha. Firstly the only constructive critism I have is that it felt it advanced very fast. Not the sex, the relationship. But it was just narrated so that's why!
Regardless, I loved the crossdressing. The lingerie. It's probably some of the best I've ever read if not the, and pretty relasitic if you ask me! I always feel a little awkward commenting on smut so I'm sorry if this is really bad review xD
So I think you should do a sequel with some proper BDSM stuff ;)

i rarely if ever read o.f. on this site but god damn i fell in love w this at the rimming

That was totally sweet and hot all at the same time. I wish there was more lol it was a great oneshot :) bobby was adorable!!!

This was really hot, but... in a cute way. Is that even possible??