This was simutaneously hot and cute, which is weird! Haha. Firstly the only constructive critism I have is that it felt it advanced very fast. Not the sex, the relationship. But it was just narrated so that's why! Regardless, I loved the crossdressing. The lingerie. It's probably some of the best I've ever read if not the, and pretty relasitic if you ask me! I always feel a little awkward commenting on smut so I'm sorry if this is really bad review xD So I think you should do a sequel with some proper BDSM stuff ;)