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  • punk-rock-princess--

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    OMG. I LOVED IT!
    August 29th, 2016 at 04:58am
  • jackybarakitty

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    @ babydolljack
    THANK YOU SO MUCH. it means a shit ton to me.
    I'm also glad i'm not the only one who enjoys a some daddy kink in my smut (; hahaha
    but anyways, glad you enjoyed !!!
    March 27th, 2015 at 10:41pm
  • babydolljack

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    this was so great and i love dom!alex or top!alex or whatever and the daddy kink is literally my life and i really enjoyed this
    March 27th, 2015 at 09:15pm
  • babydolljack

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    this was so great and i love dom!alex or top!alex or whatever and the daddy kink is literally my life and i really enjoyed this
    March 27th, 2015 at 09:13pm
  • jackybarakitty

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    March 25th, 2015 at 06:47pm
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    March 25th, 2015 at 06:46pm
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    March 25th, 2015 at 06:46pm
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    @ JamieAllOver.
    Yeah I typed the whole thing in word and when I transferred it over it lost all of the spacing and I got lazy.
    But as for the rest, I also prefer bottom!alex, but i didn't think it would go with it.
    Thank you for telling me about the rest though. I agree that aggressive!alex all the way till the end probably would've been better. and caps is kind of annoying tbh.
    March 25th, 2015 at 06:46pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    this wasn't bad but it could use a little work. no paragraph spacing and writing in all caps isn't really a good thing to do--imo at least. i loved the daddy kink and aggressive!alex, but i think it would've been better if he'd kept that aggression til the very end. and idk personal preference is bottom!alex, but that's not a problem or anything.
    March 25th, 2015 at 06:31pm
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