A Shot Across the Bow - Comments

  • hmc09

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    Please update
    May 26th, 2017 at 07:19pm
  • mgn.

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    it would be fuckin awesome if you had this lead up to the outbreak and start a sequel once this was finished!
    September 21st, 2016 at 06:47am
  • mgn.

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    so he needs to tell Rick what's going on but he won't because he's stubborn
    July 20th, 2016 at 08:26am
  • rachelvlloyd

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    This is a really interesting story and I'm loving it!! Can't wait for more x
    July 20th, 2016 at 07:41am
  • nikijamiie

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    Love it update asap :)
    July 19th, 2016 at 07:12pm
  • mgn.

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    love it! seriously!
    June 26th, 2016 at 12:02pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    This is seriously awesome! I love how you put the characters into present day without the apocalypse haha

    I just found this so I wasn't aware of your long hiatus but I just wanted to let you know I understand where you're coming from! I've got a almost 2 year old haha I know how it can be to try and write with a baby.

    I hope you keep updating! I love this story!!
    June 25th, 2016 at 05:57pm
  • mgn.

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    i'm actually super impressed with this already! I hope you keep writing it because there's so much you can do with it! i'm kinda ehh about there being more than one POV, I can see it being in Lenney's POV majority of the time and then Daryl's here and there. imo stories can get crowded with more than one POV.
    regardless though, i'm subscribing and I really do hope you keep at this!
    June 1st, 2016 at 07:49am
  • KeepCallin'MeHome

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    So, I actually find this really interesting. I love how you're incorporating all of the characters into normal, every day life.
    May 25th, 2016 at 04:25am
  • Little_Wolf

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    Update ASAP! Please! <3
    May 18th, 2016 at 08:14am
  • Tiny Box Tim

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    In love with this <3
    March 27th, 2015 at 11:07pm