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  • thewolf.

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    Jonathan ... *good shivers*
    Ari ... *bad shivers*
    August 28th, 2016 at 02:48am
  • pocahontas.

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    I AM POSTING THIS SO I DON'T LOSE IT, I'LL NOTIFY YOU WHEN I'VE FULLY COMMENTED!

    Your layout is rather dark, making it very harsh on the eyes. but I like the quote you have used! The amount of character image links is also pretty overwhelming so I wish you would have used a character page or created a tumblr page or something. Other than that, the images used and the quote alone make this look very exciting!

    CHAPTER ONE: LARA The mystery of this chapter really grabs my attention - Why does Laura seem to come from complete poverty? Why does she not own a dress, or a brush at the very least? Where is she going? Whom is she meeting? At some points the chapter seems to lack concentration, but does very well at introducing Lara and the world she lives in. I especially liked Nikolai's introduction.

    CHAPTER TWO: ARI
    June 24th, 2016 at 05:17am
  • thewolf.

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    I FORGOT ABOUT THE INTENSITY OF THIS CHAPTER
    I've been slacking
    June 21st, 2016 at 03:11am
  • HorseyHeather

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    Love this story. I'm sad I didn't find it earlier.
    June 10th, 2016 at 06:59pm
  • Juno

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    Ari you fierce bitch
    June 9th, 2016 at 05:18am
  • Juno

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    I love Lara. Snippy little shit might get eaten but I don't blame her.
    May 2nd, 2016 at 10:50pm
  • Juno

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    dudeeeee i forgot about this story lmfao
    so good.
    February 25th, 2016 at 11:00pm
  • wen.muller

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    Okay. I am HOOKED!!!!
    February 23rd, 2016 at 12:52pm
  • thewolf.

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    AHHHHHH JOHNNY VAMPIRE IS SO CUTE WALKING LARA AROUND
    POOR LARA
    THAT NIGHTMARE WAS FRIGHTENING
    I forgot all about this chapter to be honest haha
    December 28th, 2015 at 03:04pm
  • Juno

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    can they just like have vampire babies?
    December 28th, 2015 at 02:35am
  • thewolf.

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    Johnny soaked and shirtless.
    I am dead.
    Goodbye.

    LARA AND TYLER FOREVERRRRR
    December 5th, 2015 at 03:33pm
  • Juno

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    Have I mentioned how much I love Lara?
    Like, just in general.
    November 12th, 2015 at 06:09pm
  • thewolf.

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    I loooove Lenore and I also don't know why.
    I also looooooove Carmen.
    Strong women can I get an amen?!

    Johnny ... bloodied up in his dress clothes. Killin me. KILLIN ME
    November 9th, 2015 at 06:43pm
  • Juno

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    so yeah Ari is a bit on the freaky side.
    freaky scary that is.
    but that means i want her on my side
    can i keep her?
    to protect me?
    no?
    okay. i'll go die then
    October 13th, 2015 at 04:00pm
  • thewolf.

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    THAT FIGHT THO
    Johnny - DELICIOUS. Jon, yes. I love it.
    Poor TyTy though. She was just oh so harsh with him. I think he needs a hug.
    Ari is scary. But you know I think Karina is just as bad.
    I really love this story, okay? Okay.
    October 13th, 2015 at 02:25am
  • thewolf.

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    Karina sucks.
    Nikolai does not. Well, he DOES suck ... blood. But not like in the general sucking that Karina does.
    Ja feel?
    Anywaysssssss .... SO PUMPED TO START THIS WITH YOU
    I am going to go and post MY chapter now because I suck and am two days late. I'm sorry I'm the worst. Just yell at me.
    I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE. More chapters that I have read and more chapters that we write that I haven't read.
    apfhapifb;kfnapfnanfmsldfma
    It's early and I'm tired don't judge me.
    October 3rd, 2015 at 03:24pm
  • Juno

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    YOU ARE POSTING THIS GOOD LORD BABY JESUS I NEED ALCOHOL AND CANDY AND WINE AND A COLD SHOWER AND FUCK WHERE DID MY GLASSES GO

    I'm a mess as you can see.
    October 3rd, 2015 at 05:17am
  • Juno

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    YOU ARE POSTING THIS GOOD LORD BABY JESUS I NEED ALCOHOL AND CANDY AND WINE AND A COLD SHOWER AND FUCK WHERE DID MY GLASSES GO

    I'm a mess as you can see.
    October 3rd, 2015 at 05:16am
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